Topic: my poem's...

[dutchgirlfan]

haha well I only fix them the next day...most of the time is does really good to literly sleep one night before you read them again. Sometimes i have something when I wrote on; oooh this one sucks, it's crap...but when I read it later on then I have something like; hmm..this one actually is pretty nice, beautiful and sometimes I have somethinlg like; Whoow..serious, didn't I like this one yesterday?! 
but after more than 2 or 3 days or something like that than I don't fix them anymore cauz other people already wrote them.....

[uniqueandalanis4]

hahaha i do the same thing ..im like nahh its not good.!then the next day like u said im like hmmmm im really liking this one and this one lol.
it always seem's better the next day hmm i wonder why
maybe our eyes canT see good and we need to open them WIDE  HAHAHA LIKE THAT..! woop

wb..april xo

[dutchgirlfan]

hahahahah

I read somewhere that while you're sleeping your brains will get things back in order...so maybe that after a night of sleepnig we have a new fresh sight on things.

and sometims it's good to take some distance frmo your work. Sometimes I am workin on a poem and than I just can't finish it and than i'm thinknig and thinking but no inspiriation... but after a night sleeping you haven't thought about it anymor and than the next day; Bling!

[uniqueandalanis4]

bling lol coolbeans 
yeah for sure thats why i write in the morning's ..haha my eyes will barely be open and im like blah blah blah blah  then post it!lol
but i love writting ''it help's ALOT!!!!!!!!!
what do u like doing besides writting?
 

[dutchgirlfan]

haha right on.....

well I loove volleybal....listen ing to music and playing guitar and i have a race-bicycle . For the rest i'm really busy with school

what about you...?
Posted on: June 07, 2008, 01:34:52 PMi gotta go...talk to you later!

[hazel681]

ahhh april its a masterpiece!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

*Still holding on* is brilliant... I can relate in some way... Love in it is very strong even when it belongs to broken heart... *Without the thought* doesnt only remind me of *Haunted* but it greatly has its spirit... Its really touchy and style is professional... *Who are you??* is strong... I agree with Bianca that the example is well chosen... you point important piece of relationship... and the story is very realistic even when spoken in poetical way... *I thought* directs perfectly to *Because of you*... You have talent to express emotions in your arts with overwhelming realism... You give me low chance to suspect if they are not taken from your life... *hey you come here* is more alive by your smileys... it makes it dorky but your talent keep it as honest words... part about secret makes it more romantic... *You have shown me* is like two hearts - complite... I guess you should try write together much more... Love likes to be expressed by two hearts... *With you* has emotions burnt up to fire colour... You really scream your love into paper... I mean... umm... glass?... haha.. Its dorky... *Careless words* makes me wonder how many affairs of love you know... this one is so meaningful like pure honest hug... with spiritual share of love... *Gripped* is like mirror of Heaven... Place worth only true love... *Your love is like rain...* I love it... and since my liking of rainy weather is obvious then I cant be usefull in  criticising this art... cos i see it only from beauty side... *Walk on by* has intresting thoughts flow... Even base idea of walking by makes it greatly inspired poem... *With you* has some dorky piece... I like its comparison... love as blanket... *Snap shot* gives smile... Its simple... but special like flash from camera... and meaning of photo... Uh... I cant dig further... haha... I am exhausted... I tried to read as much as I can today... but you are amazing... Let say I just took my eyes away from you and you flood whole field by your flowers... Lol... I will try to get back to it later... Meanwhile... Wishing you all good and bless... Cya

[uniqueandalanis4]

erased :'(

















Posted on: June 09, 2008, 06:55:05 PM

[be_ki]

Your work April is always beautiful x

[be_ki]

your welcome always my friend x

[uniqueandalanis4]

  i was just doing a tiny poem lol..it think its cute,i like my last one..

[hazel681]

^ its gorgeous!

[uniqueandalanis4]

awwwwwwww thanks hazel i love the last one..haha im such a dorko..
haha thanks for your comment
i really wanted the last poem,road to your dreams to be inspiring for other's 

do you think it is?

[be_ki]

it really is in a very beautiful way April honey x

[uniqueandalanis4]

awww thank you once again..
question how do u know me lol?
i dont remember you ?can u refresh my memory ?lol