Topic: Thoughts and a thousand smiles, by mee!

[be_ki]

Your Angels Three

The walls seem smaller now the door is closed
The lights are all gone the people have moved away
One echo of broken heart left in this place here
One life still lying in the dark with nothing but stained eyes

No lights no ground to hold on to for these wounds to be seen
Head in the bleeding hands of the girl they forgot to set free
Some help her, please let someone see
don’t God forsake her and leave her on her knees

The beating breath of her quickened heart burns her in the black
Before her eyes the fear of being so much alone forever
Painted wicked from taped laughter of those gone from her sight
Painful corners with joy in the sharp erase of her existence

Stare in to the thick if you see where it lays there
The tiny light will crack your bruises and free those tired feet
For with wings of heaven and a smile to take your hand
you see them there, those beauteous, your Angels Three.

Your tired, hold my hand you heard one smile
Be strong for now this is the life you belong
Come with me and just for the rest of your life
be free.

look in to your mirror your sun begins to rise
In tandem you hear their sweet blue song for you
Earth bound Angel don’t cry for we are with you always

Your beauteous, your Angels Three

[ericb]

That's excellent beki.God bless you always.

[be_ki]

thanks gorgeous 

[hazel681]

its great! i love how you tell a story but its still a poem! i could never do that! ITS AWESOME!

[be_ki]

Only a thought

Cherries, fat and ripe
with bouncing red emotion
A fruit unlike a beating heart,
or does it shadow even a little?

Torn, in sweet ripened pairs
from their beating thick vine
Taken from their daylight
and stuffed neatly upon mouth

So unlike the heart,
no eating of it’s soul and spitting the pip
Dense and fast are they ever even here?
Only the taste of such ripened beauty
left in a void with only bitter words
and a hunger for more

[dutchgirlfan]

love the last parts...from both poems..but maybe that';s also beacuse these are the parts i understand the most... you write difficult but it's really deep.....

[be_ki]

well put, i do write deep and sometimes a little difficult to follow. Sorry about that 

[hazel681]

A. M. azing!

[be_ki]

I woke up today
with hurt beneath my feet.
The world lay sleeping around me
and the sun lay behind
a sweet blanket of the cloud.

My bare heart was hurting
but I made it up that cold stone.
Cold and hungry, bare as night,
to the place I see the world,
without the screaming around.

Your eyes I see are smiling
I found you, arms open wide.
I work and work till the day turns behind
but with me you always were
and these bleeding hands touch your ground

I did this because you asked me
not in shame or greed,
only because you asked me.
My tears they are shaking
but drying in the waking sound.

Kiss yesterday with sweet loving song
be free now of this life
Hold your beautiful head to my sky,
feel your wonderful light.
For you my darling, have been found
Posted on: June 01, 2008, 03:13:16 AM
It's funny
What’s it like to be gone,
to not care for you heart
and your soul to be free.

The dose was more than enough
but you haven’t collected me,
that’s just like you, yeah, hello, it‘s me.

Will you laugh with me,
as the lights fade completely?
I’m almost gone now anyway.

I smile, its nice to finally be here.
I hope in beam it stays this way,
for this my fading numbing prize.

Its funny how much you see.
I’m laughing at the black
that’s always hurting me.

**** you, and you’re a pig.
Take your foot off, your pathetic.
You don’t deserve to know me.

It’s funny how much you see
when your arms are broken.
Ripped, torn and broken.

It’s funny how much you see.
In the light of the truth, please,
when your whole world is set free.

[dutchgirlfan]

whoow that last one is.....bang bang..powerful! I love the last 2 phrases..they have a nice flow.

[hazel681]

you are so great, your poems are piercing and its outstanding the way you write! your poems are PERFECT!

[ericb]

thanks gorgeous 

No need to thank ME beki.I'm only telling the truth.you're a great writer.God bless.

[ummm]

Love your stuff Bexy Bex, give us more girl!!

[Greek]

Beki, my beautiful fairy, i love you. you are amaz-za-zing.
end of story.
jk, keep up  the great work chica!

[Tj_pinkgurl]

Parts of "its funny" really stood out to me especially this part

"Will you laugh with me,
as the lights fade completely?
I’m almost gone now anyway"

and i dunno what its about obviously has its own meaning to you but theres something about it that i like and can relate to..your not alone and your a great writer