Topic: Below

[Greek]

a set standard
who says its right for me
start to change
alittle to young
but old enough to know

it all starts to blur
where did the line go
it was crossed
and now is gone

falling down
cant get up
look up to the sun
only hurts my eyes
if only it were an
answer in disguise

[Tj_pinkgurl]

This is deep and obviously has its own meaning for you

"it all starts to blur
where did the line go
it was crossed
and now is gone"

That ^^ part to me means alot, to me is means the line was crossed, and when you cross that line you cant get back, which sometimes isnt good

hope your alright
stay strong

[hazel681]

thats sooooooooo beautiful! you are a great writer.

[Greek]

This is deep and obviously has its own meaning for you

"it all starts to blur
where did the line go
it was crossed
and now is gone"

That ^^ part to me means alot, to me is means the line was crossed, and when you cross that line you cant get back, which sometimes isnt good

hope your alright
stay strong

in this case, she was too far over the line

[Tj_pinkgurl]

yeah
I can understand it
writing lets it all out
keep writing
and im really sorry 
take care
..your not alone..

[Greek]

thanks, yea, writing is my out. lol

[Tj_pinkgurl]

thats heaps good  *thumbs up* 

[Greek]

hah, you said heaps.
though i was the only one who says that
lmao

[Tj_pinkgurl]

lol thats funny, yeah I say it alot.. i didnt realise only most australians say it, i thought everyone used it, but woohoo someone else uses the word heaps around here, awesome

[Greek]

lol

[dutchgirlfan]

short...powerfull.. ..deep

real poetry..unfortunatl y a sad message. Take care sweetheart.

[Greek]

sometimes a sad message needs to be shot across though

[be_ki]

Beautiful my lil favorite lady. She is a fool.
I love ya girl, always and any old time 

[_IDK_MY_BFF_EJ_]

beki why u calling me a fool???

 

[dutchgirlfan]

hahaha beki