You are making nice disturbance in my not so calm mind anyway... My first impression was to call for erasing *it* from like every inside of line to reclaim grammar correctness, but... like in every deep writting... sight is slowly reaching further bottoms... I agree as it was good move if you use it to strengthen evidences and causes of love... The ending sounds a bit too drastic but it comes only from different levels of heart state.. in comparison of writer true feelings or variously earned experience with all my own... I cant figure out what or who is your inspiration... Maybe I just have lack of time for searching... Thrill tells me its some girl name... or nickname... By the every feelings mess in people matching and reminding me atoms various collisions... I wish such wounded less pain and more luck... Write on... World moves... Truth falls deep into stone...
