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Arise Snailguin,Arise.............
Mrok(Gloom)Robert M:
Wow... At beginning I was ready to complain why your new chapter seems so short looool :D... but.. you didn't only amaze me with story dedication over discrimination, but also its ending scores with writer talent :smiley45:... A spice of good humor in jar of moral contemplation over world problems :smiley22:... Good to read... worth memory.. and perfect to await more chapters :smiley15:.. Write on :)
P.S.
And how not to like snailguin lol? :D
ericb:
Heyi Rob.You'l see very soon.how some people real to snailguin.Both Wilder have very valid points.As for what happens well,.............. you'll see.And since every story needs a good villian....well.... Ive already said too much,lol. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
K0RAYMA:
lol ya good job eric keep writing plz i want to finish the story
Mrok(Gloom)Robert M:
--- Quote from: ericb on October 21, 2009, 11:01:53 AM ---Heyi Rob.You'l see very soon.how some people real to snailguin.Both Wilder have very valid points.As for what happens well,.............. you'll see.And since every story needs a good villian....well.... Ive already said too much,lol. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Oh.. you didn't tell me too much.. You only let me circle around direction of story... but it will be fully and only your choice what will happen... Even mind reader could learn like only misty cut sentences and shadow of whole idea lol... hmmm... And even if you would share with me like with brief plan of new update then I would still wait for whole theater show... Its like some movies we remember and prize for genius quotes... So far you only rise my anxiety loool... Still... no push.. no rush... Good ideas are coming in natural way :)
ericb:
Thankyou,both of you.I'm working on my next chapter now.I still have some things to work out,so i will be posting chapter five on Monday. :) :) :) :)
Posted on: October 23, 2009, 07:50:16 AM Chapter Five:
Watkins remained silent.Within his own mind,he was now not only
begining to question the judgement of his friend,but now,his sanity as well. "It will take him
some time to get up here,Wider said."He moves rather slowly". Finally,Watkins broke his
silence asking"Will,you mentioned before that he has extraordinary abilities. Exactly WHAT abilities
does he have?"
With a smile wilder answered "Well,for one thing the Snailguin is FAR
stronger physically,than anyone or ANYTHING on the planet!! I've tested his strength
Jeremy.Not too long ago,he was outside in my backyard. Don't worry,noone saw him,I put
up a huge wooden fence arounf my backyard. But Jeremy,he lifted my car, that's right my CAR
over his head!! He did t pretty easily too!! If his strength has a limit,then I couldn't even
BEGIN to calculate what it is!!!"
"So, he's super strong,Watkins said. "Yes,but that not all,Wilder
said.So far,I've discovered some OTHER attributes as well. He's invulnerable!! Competely
invulnerable!! I discovered this not too long after I brought him home. I was in my garage.
I came in to answer my house phone. My garage caught fire,it was MY fault,I'd left a lit
cigarette burning in there. The whole place went up.Snailguin,was in the yard,he thought
that I was still in there,and went in to save me. He not only survived the fire,Jeremy,there
wasn't so much as a scratch on him!!"
"That doesnt make him completely invulnerable Watkins said."He might
just somehow be immune to fire." With a heavy sigh,Wilder said "No.You don't get it. With his
permission, I was able to TEST his invulnerablity to see-
"TESTED,Watkins interupted.Will,Will,please....... don't tell me you did
things to him just to see whether or not he can be hurt. DON'T TELL ME THAT!!" "I DID test him,
Wilder responded. And I've discovered that he has other powers too. For example-
"I don't think I want to hear anymore,Watkins again interupted."Please,
no more." By now, the Sanilguin had reached the bottom of the ramp,and was slowly inching
his way to the top.Watkins was quick to notice that as he moved the snailquin left a trail of
slime afer him,much in the manner of a normal snail.As he watched the Snailguin move Watkins thought "I'm glad I'm not the one who has to clean THAT up." Within two minutes the Snailguin had reached the top of the ramp.
"I'm sorry I'm so slow,the Snailguin said,in his high pitched squeaky voice. Wilder then smiled."You have nothing at all to be sorry about. Now come on,give me your wing,the car is parked in the back." Wilder then took hold of the Snailguins right wing and began to move through the kitchen toward the back door,pulling the Snailguin along after him as he went. Watkins,followed them,all the while being careful as not to slip on the trail of slime that the
Snailguin left behind him as he moved. Dr.Wilder proceded to pull the Snailguin along after
him,down a ramp he had installed at the back door in place of steps.
Sure enough,Wilder's car was parked in the back. Still behind them,
Watkins watched as Wilder opened the front passenger's door. "i had to remove the seat,
Wilder said. "It was the ONLY way he'd fit." Once he ad assisted the snailguin into the
car, he shut the doors saying "Jeremy,do you want to come with us? This is Snailguin's
very first car ride. i'd like for you to come along."
For a moment Watkins considered remaining behind. He saw no good
in what Wilder was about to do. How were people going to react to this unique being
Wilder had created? No,this is not going to be good at ALL,he thought. Ultimately,his
long time friendship with Wilder would prevail,as Wilder said "Ok. I'll go with you."
Watkins then walked around the car,and got in by the left side. Then Wilder got in,put the key in the ignition,as as he pulled out of the driveway he said "Snailguin.It's time for you to meet the outside world." for the next few minutes,all was silent. Then Watkins said "I haven't
seen you smoke a cigarette since I've been here.Did you quit?"
"After the fire,Watkins answered. About two minutes later,they had
arrived at the store.Once all three had exited the car,Wilder took hold of the Snailguin's right
wing and pulled him along after him.As the three entered the store,a very uneasy feeling
came over Watkins.
To Be Continued.......... ......
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