Topic: Trina's Poems **Hard to say goodbye + Magazine Perfection**

[hyrpgmt]

wow that one is really good too!!...a story poem lol....sorry about your cousin!!  :'(

[I-am-@ddicted]

My first attempt at a song

Withdrawals Without You

I see you everyday                                                                               
Your within my reach                                                                                 
Then why do I crave your touch                                                         
And crave the way you speak
Without you I am empty
And your that missing piece

A day without you
Is a day without meaning
A day with no beginning or end
I need you here
So I can keep breathing
So I can keep feeling
Your that drug I?ve been craving
And I?m having withdrawals
Without you

Yesterday I was searching
Tomorrow I?ll be yearning
Today I am wishing
For one more fix
One more precious moment with you
I want you ? need to ? feel you

A day without you
Is a day without meaning
A day with no beginning or end
I need you here
So I can keep breathing
So I can keep feeling
Your that drug I?ve been craving
And I?m having withdrawals

Rehab don?t sort this type of addiction
Because these symptoms, they?re not making sense
I don?t shake or sweat
I cry, regret
Losing you
I?m suffering withdrawals without you.

A day without you
Is a day without meaning
A day with no beginning or end
I need you here
So I can keep breathing
So I can keep feeling
Your that drug I?ve been craving
And I?m having withdrawals
Without you

A day without you
Is a day without meaning
A day with no beginning or end

[hyrpgmt]

beautiful song!!...love the chorus

[I-am-@ddicted]

beautiful song!!...love the chorus

wow you really think its good :D:D:D thank you .. the chorus was my favourite part too   I havn't got a melody for it though but one of my teachers at school said I should take to school band and they will help come up with one for me which is wicked!
anyway thanks again for thinking it was beautiful!

[Thera]

WOW, love the song Katrina, well done, it's so amazing i just love it, you made me actually speechless, you totally have talent to become a great songwriter/poet WOOHOO, GO KATRINA, GO KATRINA

[I-am-@ddicted]

WOW, love the song Katrina, well done, it's so amazing i just love it, you made me actually speechless, you totally have talent to become a great songwriter/poet WOOHOO, GO KATRINA, GO KATRINA

GO ME ... GO ME!! THANK YOU!! and now you have made me speechless 'Katrina the great song writer' well second after Kelly obviously! oh no third after you but i settle for third but thank you love ya for that haha

[Thera]

GO ME ... GO ME!! THANK YOU!! and now you have made me speechless 'Katrina the great song writer' well second after Kelly obviously! oh no third after you but i settle for third but thank you love ya for that haha

"GO ME ... GO ME!!" < haha, indeed GO KATRINA, GO KATRINA "THANK YOU!!" < well here comes the sentence again > you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah, hahahaha "and now you have made me speechless" < coolbeans, i've made someone else speechless instead of me for one time, lol "'Katrina the great song writer" < indeed that's right, you're totally right about that "well second after Kelly obviously!" < lol, well yeah maybe, idk, hahaha "oh no third after you but i settle for third " < uhm, WOW, did you just said what ya just said? lol................ ................you just set me second after Kelly with writing songs/poet *faints*, OMG.......WOW, why me after Kelly, you belong 2nd, you're a great songwriter like ya said yourself "but thank you love ya for that haha " < and again: you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah and awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww www that's sweet loving me for that, but it's the truth and i loved ya even already before i said it, lol

[hyrpgmt]

wow you really think its good :D:D:D thank you .. the chorus was my favourite part too   I havn't got a melody for it though but one of my teachers at school said I should take to school band and they will help come up with one for me which is wicked!
anyway thanks again for thinking it was beautiful!

ya that would be cool if you had somebody make up a melody for ya!!
you should be a writer.....as a job

[SuperNatural1901]

those are great I love "Withdrawals Without You" that was so so so so good and I love the title
~MelDork!

[kackie]

Wow, Withdrawals Without You had some awesome phrases in it. I liked that and it moved forward with a cool rthym! I liked that one a lot... it was musically written
Tear Filled Eyes was very good too, it really struck me. It's about regret and remembering someone... those are powerful things to write about. There is a song by the Corrs called Angel that was kind of like that... but yours is a little darker (in a good way!) so kudos to you, my dear. Keep up the good work!

[I-am-@ddicted]

those are great I love "Withdrawals Without You" that was so so so so good and I love the title
~MelDork!

thank you!!! 'withdrawals without you' is the first song I wrote so thats awsome you commented on that! 

any way thanks again
Posted on: February 05, 2007, 07:02:39 PM

Wow, Withdrawals Without You had some awesome phrases in it. I liked that and it moved forward with a cool rthym! I liked that one a lot... it was musically written
Tear Filled Eyes was very good too, it really struck me. It's about regret and remembering someone... those are powerful things to write about. There is a song by the Corrs called Angel that was kind of like that... but yours is a little darker (in a good way!) so kudos to you, my dear. Keep up the good work!

wow cool .. thats a extremely great compliment to say 'withdrawals without you' was musically written so cheers
'Tear filled eyes' is everyone's favourite poem lol thats awsome though and I will have to listen to the song you mentioned I haven't listened to it!

Thanka again great comments like this mean a lot!!
Posted on: February 05, 2007, 07:06:41 PM

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Well these are two songs I have recently written Tell me what ya think and I don't mind Criticism lol ok

A Letter to God

God,
What have I done wrong
For this to keep happening
Seems like every time
I try to move on
Your there waiting for me
Ready to throw
Another obstacle my way
Another event, that for a while
Will kill my hopes
And shatter my dreams

Please Lord let one day go by
When I won?t cry
Where I won?t miss somebody
And Lord I don?t know why
You?ll answer me now
But if you choose to
This letter is addressed to you.

It just seems every thing
Is getting too much
I?m crying for help
And people just walk past
And I?m begging them please
Allow me to escape
The four walls of my mind
That torture and burn my soul
Let me escape, leave me to experience

One day go by
When I won?t cry
Where I won?t miss somebody
And Lord I don?t know why
You?ll answer me now
But if you choose to
This letter is addressed to you.

P.S. I?m waiting
___________________ ___________________ __

Infatuation

I see the way you stare
When you think no-one is looking
I know how your heart feels
Because that?s all that you?ve been saying
You say you love me
But I doubt it
You say you need me
And baby I?m having a hard time beliving

Darling, you don?t love me
This is just some infatuation
Say those three words and I?m gonna run
Back off, slow down, I just need fun

Start over, move on
Soon you will see
How your confused
And nothing can be started with that
Do what you want
Go ahead, give me a moment
Giving me the time to think
Will still give you the same answer, that

Darling, you don?t love me
This is just some infatuation
Say those three words and I?m gonna run
Back off, slow down, I just need fun

Don?t jump in too fast
Like quick sand you?ll sink
Love takes time
Let it grow
It might be slow
But the end it immense

Darling, you don?t love me
This is just some infatuation
Say those three words and I?m gonna run
Back off, slow down, I just need fun

[Thera]

WOW, amazing songs, i love them btw what does "infatuation" means? idk that word, lol but i love the songs, you're amazing Katrina

[I-am-@ddicted]

WOW, amazing songs, i love them btw what does "infatuation" means? idk that word, lol but i love the songs, you're amazing Katrina

Infatuation means to think you love someone but infact you don't you only think you do. 

There is a song by Christina Aguilera called 'Infatuation' its really good you should listen to it lol

and cheers Thera for saying there good loves ya

[Thera]

Infatuation means to think you love someone but infact you don't you only think you do. 

There is a song by Christina Aguilera called 'Infatuation' its really good you should listen to it lol

and cheers Thera for saying there good loves ya

ah okay, now i understand, that's for explaining and okay, i shall search for that song, lol "and cheers Thera for saying there good loves ya" < you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah, it's the truth, so i had to say it loves ya too

[I-am-@ddicted]

OK this one I have only just found but I wrote it ages ago ... and I was actually inspired by Kelly because tabloids were saying she was fat and I remember just looking at her and thinking if that?s thought of as fat then this word is crazy ... and then I idolised her even more because even with all the pressures because of the 'fat' thing she never lost weight she still kept her figure, which taught me to be proud of the way I am and that these skinny, anorexic looking celebrities are not all that beautiful and that Kelly is more beautiful then any of them., so yea she inspired me in this poem.

Blessed

You don?t like the way I have my hair
Or the choice of clothes I wear
But I don?t always expect you to
I am me, Nobody else
Criticize if you want
What good will that do?
In a world so distorted
Where the only image
Accepted are the models in magazines
The models who?s last decent meal
Came when they were 12 years old
The images that are edited so much
The models don?t recognise themselves
Is that who I?m compared to
Is that perfection to you
Well I?m sorry I don?t fit that role
Im human, nothing more nothing less
And the day I accepted that
Was the day I became ? Blessed
Posted on: February 10, 2007, 02:51:23 PMFriends

The people that we regard as friends,
Are special, are fun and are always there
The people that you can trust with your life
And bring to your life that added flare

Without them you feel you?d be lost
That life would be boring, naked and bare
Your secrets they hold, and never would tell
And some memories with you they share

See friends can never be replaced
Their like family, loving and always care
They make boring things fun and excitable
And calm you in times of despair