Topic: Trina's Poems **Hard to say goodbye + Magazine Perfection**

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Angel Katrina ... Cancer is an enemy that should be brought to extinction... Your poem points perfectly in his cruel nature... I pray there are only few technology steps to make it just an easy illness like simple fever... Maybe I want too much... but... there is always something that can be done... World holds enough suffer to bring me down... Rising it to more can break even soul core... Your poem makes me hear splash of thoughts sailing to those that were taken... in unfair fight... it cant be right... It kills from inside... you cant run away... you cant hide... You have to stay... Sometimes all that is left is only... to pray... and hold strong... before judgement day will come along... just for you... once... or someday ever... Meanwhile... live... and share the light you can give... Beauty poem Katrina... like meteors strips... painting the sky...

[ericb]

I think you are an increbible wrter.I'm gonna come back on and read more of these later.Those so much talent here.I wish I had the time to read and coment on everyone's writing,really.God bless you always.
 

[I-am-@ddicted]

Couple more Lyrics i've wrote

Hard to say Goodbye


In those treasured moment
Where my heart was in your hands
My time had no demands
Who knew?
Perfection could go so wrong
My soul lay in your eyes
It?s gone
Darling, you?re running out of alibis

[chorus]
And I can?t seem to find a way through
And I can?t find a way to love you
So fed up of crying
Of Lying
It?s stopped me from trying
It?s always hard to say goodbye

Now all your eye?s hold
Are the tangled up lies
The ones you tried so hard to hide
Give up
In my path I choose to lead
There?s only one room for one
It?s tough Darling I know
But who said trying to love was fun?

And I can?t seem to find a way through
And I can?t find a way to love you
So fed up of crying
Of Lying
It?s stopped me from trying
It?s always hard to say goodbye

And I?ll get those nights
Where I feel so alone
Wishing I could roll over
And you?ll be on the phone
But I can?t
Yeah it?s tearing me apart
But I?ll get sober
Yeah I will make it through
I?ll get over you


Magazine Perfection

Her Hair is the perfect shade
Her eyes are where beauty?s found
No fat, a waist of size zero
Only a heavenly 98 pounds
And this creation stares out from her aisle.
Her hidden talent is how to deceive
Her smile as white as heavens glow
Skin so smooth its almost a sin

[Chorus]
Oh and how the other girls wamt to be her
Look a certain way for acceptation
If I could I would tell them to stop it
Stop being poisoned by the magazine perfection

What you can?t see is the lying
Her picture has made you believe
That perfection is how that girl looks
For an image they are making you grieve
She is not as perfect as what she appears
Given a role, a role of a Goddess
So the world is left wanting her
Unaware she is equally a mess

[chorus]
Oh and how the other girls want to be her
Look a certain way for acceptation
If I could I would tell them to stop it
Stop being poisoned by the magazine perfection

[Bridge]
All the girls are forced into thinking
Looking good is the result of not eating
And the men are looking for perfection
Left disheartened when they cannot find a creation
Make-up, products and computer edits
If that?s how to look perfect forget it

[chorus]
Oh and how the other girls want to be her
Look a certain way for acceptation
If I could I would tell them
Stop being poisoned by the magazine perfection

[ericb]

Those are very true lyrics.I've noticed that when youwrite stories,you have an increbible sense of detail.When you write songs/poems,they seem like they are very heartfelt.I learn from you every time I read your writing.I hope you will consider a career in it.Some of the things that trouble the best authors in the world,you've mastered easily.God Bles you always.

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Hey Angel Katrina... I hate word goodbye... even when I say it I never mean it... I *burn bridges* only on demand... and even then I leave chance to come along again... O f course if such someone want to... Damm it... I lost this way someone important lately... I miss her... but she hates me... so it sucks anyway... Eh... Your lyric *Hard to say goodbye* reminds me so much about it... I guess its good... when song is lifting emotions and is turning on memories... Sober... sober... ... sober from her smile... sober from her laugh... sober from her talks... sober from her worries... sober... from love......... Ok... damm it... I better let it go... today......
*Magazine perfection*... I like its care for this strange, confussing and difficult problem in... lets say... women and men relations... Yeah... it brings down that women do too much to look perfect... getting into competition that actually makes them lose... cos only cover is perfect... when we all are truly looking for something more supporting and certain than good look in partners... I guess it effect from getting old... but... In the end perfection is in care to look good without too much sacrifice... Balance between fat and skinny is not easy... specially in current world... making everyone (more or less) so lost... Funny thing... for a moment I felt guilty I was openly admiring look of some... errr... shinning celebs... but I can say honestly it was only admiring... The perfect girl for me should be my best friend and more... someone I can rely on... I can fully trust... I can share my true me... all darkness and light I have inside... someone I want forever to be close... someone that will not hurt me deeply... someone that will need me... someone that will love me... Why I am saying this?... cos there is nothing about look... but... to fulfill perfection... I would like such girl to care about her look... cos it will make me feel better if my girl will care to be shining in my eyes... (not too much... I am jealous kind) even if she dont have to be *face from some magazine*... or if she would be - what would be blessing - simple girl from neighbourhood... oh... here even nod to Kelly... she is the best from celebs... since she is unique... She stole my heart once... I cant forget... and i guess I am looking for such... perfect girl... around me... eh... I gtg... ... damm it girl!... but... eh... I must...