Topic: Trina's Poems **Hard to say goodbye + Magazine Perfection**

[Thera]

i love those 2 new poems, they're amazing and i really can relate to them, so that's great really love the "Blessed" poem, but i also really love the "Friends" poem, haha they both are amazing

[I-am-@ddicted]

i love those 2 new poems, they're amazing and i really can relate to them, so that's great really love the "Blessed" poem, but i also really love the "Friends" poem, haha they both are amazing

THANK YOU!! good you can relate to them I think most people can realate to the 'Blessed' one because it happens to everyone about feeling insecure about themselves!

anyway thanks Thera!!!! *hugs*

[Thera]

THANK YOU!! good you can relate to them I think most people can realate to the 'Blessed' one because it happens to everyone about feeling insecure about themselves!

anyway thanks Thera!!!! *hugs*

YOU'RE WELCOME, ANYTIME, IT'S TIMELESS, YEAH!! lol "good you can relate to them I think most people can realate to the 'Blessed' one because it happens to everyone about feeling insecure about themselves!" < that's true and i feel like almost every day insecure, well i think i do, but everyone has that, like you said, haha "anyway thanks Thera!!!! *hugs*" < you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah Katrina *huge hug back and never let go*

[I-am-@ddicted]

Figure Me Out

One day I laugh
The next I cry
Sometimes I know I love you
And then I leave you with goodbye

I?m so messed up,
Oh

I?m confusing,
Abusing
Refusing your love
Selecting
Collecting
and loving bad stuff
But you?re the only man
I know, who can
Come figure me out

I aim high
Accept the low
Always hold back
Regretting to show

Oh

I?m confusing,
Abusing
Refusing your love
Selecting
Collecting
and loving bad stuff
But you?re the only man
I know, who can
Come figure me out

Bet you didn?t know I loved you
Your so unaware I still do
I push you away, so you can?t see through
To a part that I don?t want you to.
I?m so scared your gonna see
That hidden part of me
To scared of breaking free
Oh won?t you please come rescue me

[Thera]

wow, that's an amazing poem/song, i love it and i can relate to it, so yeah i know how ya feel. but i love it how ya wrote it, it's just amazing well done, i can't wait for the next update and keep up the good work

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Katrina. I read your poems and songs... and I wrote this little poem just from the sudden... for you as proof I like yours very much

My bless

Maybe I cant cry
But I feel tear in my eye
And I shall let it fall on ground
For you with blessed sound
Because your poems pierce my heart
What you are doing is a special art
Your words gave me feeling I need
Only this way I still breathe
You have experienced so much
You have learned life touch
And I would turn back time
If it wasn't bad aim
Future is before you
Take bless because I do

[I-am-@ddicted]

Wow Robert (if thats your name sorry if it isn't) your poem is really good and if its aimed at my poems, then I am honoured, Thank you! for the poem to come so quickly to you, like you said is a good thing because you know it will be good and your poem shows that!! I hope you start your own post/topic thing like I have and share more of your poems!! I would enjoy reading more!!

Well Thank you again!!

[Thera]

Wow Robert (if thats your name sorry if it isn't) your poem is really good and if its aimed at my poems, then I am honoured, Thank you! for the poem to come so quickly to you, like you said is a good thing because you know it will be good and your poem shows that!! I hope you start your own post/topic thing like I have and share more of your poems!! I would enjoy reading more!!

Well Thank you again!!

he made you feel speechless right? he did the same to me, only he didn't wrote a poem about my poems, but he did made me freakin speechless, the most speechless i've ever been, lol but he's right, you're poems are amazing and his poem about your poems is true you're an amazin poet

[I-am-@ddicted]

Thank you Thera!! yes he did make me speechless but any positive feedback on my poems make me speechless because I don't think of them as amazing but other people do so its wierd to hear it!! Your probaly the same, like you don't know why people think its as good as they say lol do you understand lol

[Thera]

Thank you Thera!! yes he did make me speechless but any positive feedback on my poems make me speechless because I don't think of them as amazing but other people do so its wierd to hear it!! Your probaly the same, like you don't know why people think its as good as they say lol do you understand lol

you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah cool, that he made you speechless i thought he did, he said such amazing things about you and they're all true i understand what you're saying, it's just hard to believe that people love it so much what you write, but what they say is true, but still it's hard to believe and it makes you speechless, cuz you think that you don't write that great, but it's great to them, so you think the opposite of them. but yeah your poems are amazing and i love them freakin much

[I-am-@ddicted]

Oh this is my 400th post so I decided to mark another 100 posts with a poem that has nothing to do with it

Anyway this is my newest poem:

ROSE

You resemble a rose
Whose love produces sharp edged thorns
Which cut like razors
And as the pain runs deep
I find myself loving it
I find myself loving you

[Thera]

WOOHOO, GO KATRINA, GO KATRINA, for your 400th post i loved the short poem, it's short, but very strong, so that makes it an amazing poem well done Katrina

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

My real name is... Robert ... lie is a word I only want to keep in dictionary and shall never have need to use it and shall never feel it aim on me :'(... truth can hurt, but truth is pure and makes stronger ... Rose... rose is a symbol that makes me speechless . I think I know One Special Rose (a little)... your poem brings back more memory I can write on houndred of paper pieces... more I can tell in time of one day... more than someone weaker could survive ... but memories I value very much , so I am thankful for power of your poem .  And one more thing about your poems... their style... I could even say I hear sounds ... Yeah, now I can name this feeling. I felt it also reading others Dork?s poems and I will possibly caught myself on doing this not only once again. I mean your style in cooperation to mine is more singing or music kind. I don't complain if you take my words this way, but... for real mine sounds more like base for raper than as base to create more rock songs. I am happy anyway, because I don't have musician talent, but I cant imagine living without music, so here is coming my expectation that yours and others creation (both poems and songs) I will hear one day as beautiful songs... songs that their names I will write on my heart to never forget... I am patient, but I feel like child waiting for Christmass presents when I think about this idea ... I believe it will come true ... but no rush, because I am glad I can read them here ... I just never feel I can get enough ...

[hyrpgmt]

400 posts!! and tons of great poems!!

[I-am-@ddicted]

Wow Robert you have complemented me to beyond words!! I mean for someone to say they could imagine my poems/songs being heard on TV and Radio .. its the best thing I can ever imagine!! you have made me happy with those simple word...They mean so much THANK YOU...especually when your poems are even more better then mine!!
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hyrpgmt sorry I don't know your name but thank you also calling my poems great just to find one poem of mine great would have been a big enough compliment but to say tons of great poems ... well that is way more better

THANK YOU TO ALL THAT HAVE COMMENTED!!