Topic: Update: 12-22-07

[SuperNatural1901]

Hey everyone well I have been writing poems and I have alot more but I haven't typed them yet so here are just my first hope y'all like em'

You Don?t

You don?t see me
How I see you
You see only a person
Not what?s hiding inside
But I see you
I see right through you
I see your heart
And I see how much you care
But you don?t see me.

I see you when no one else does
I see the pain in your eyes and the agony in your heart
But you don?t see me.

I can hear you. Can you hear me?
I can hear the whispers and the silence that you hide
But you don?t hear me.

I see you talking with people but they don?t hear you
They only see they don?t listen.

I listen? I listen to everything you say
But you don?t listen to me.

I can see you
But you don?t see me



   Secret

I have a secret
Buried deep inside
It?s a secret no one knows
It?s my secret
That I?ll never tell
It?s a very well kept secret
That you?ll never guess
I?m by you and you can?t tell
That I have a secret
That you don?t know
I?m keeping it from you
In fear of what you might think
Of what you might say
I?ve known this secret for awhile now
But you don?t know
I?ve wanted to speak
I?ve wanted to tell you my secret
For so long now
But I can?t?
I can?t say it out loud
I can only say it in my head
But when I?m alone
Far from you
Out of site from everyone
I allow my secret to escape my lips
I love you.

   I Fell

You told me everything
And I fell for it
I fell for all your stories that you have told a hundred times
I fell hitting the ground hard
Impossible to move
Impossible to get up
Impossible to heal
I told you everything
I told you my secrets
I told you what was hidden deep inside
I told you what no one else knew
And you do this to me
You lied?
You lied straight to my face
You told me every line in the book
And I fell for each one
I fell for your smile, your eyes, your voice.
And you do this to me
I saw you with her
And you claim that ?she was just a friend?
But I know the truth
I know what you have been doing behind my back
And I have to do this
I can?t pretend nothing is wrong anymore
My heart breaks more everyday
But I have to do this
In time I know I can mend my broken heart
You say you love me and that you need me
I know it?s true
But I can?t be apart of this anymore
I have to do this for me
I have to go?
I have to leave you forever

[Snappy1010]

OMG MEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u never told me u wrote poems!!! well, u did, but not like this! they're beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why don't u show people? people say *eh hem* like me?!?!? lol. -Rachel

[SuperNatural1901]

OMG MEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u never told me u wrote poems!!! well, u did, but not like this! they're beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why don't u show people? people say *eh hem* like me?!?!? lol. -Rachel

Sorry Rach... I didn't know if anyone would like them I don't really think that there that great and I don't know if people will like them I just got brave to post them after Thera said that my poem that I posted with my fanfic was good... anyway sorry Rach but I didn't want to show anyone the book that I write them in.
~Mel

[Snappy1010]

Sorry Rach... I didn't know if anyone would like them I don't really think that there that great and I don't know if people will like them I just got brave to post them after Thera said that my poem that I posted with my fanfic was good... anyway sorry Rach but I didn't want to show anyone the book that I write them in.
~Mel

i know cause one time i asked u if i could see the notebook and u said no! i was mad! lol. but now i'm happy!

[hyrpgmt]

wow.....those are really good poems!!...my favourite is you don't but there all good!!

[SuperNatural1901]

i know cause one time i asked u if i could see the notebook and u said no! i was mad! lol. but now i'm happy!

I know you were mad but I just couldn't show them yet you understand and I'm happy that your happy.

wow.....those are really good poems!!...my favourite is you don't but there all good!!

Thanks so much I'm glad that ya liked them... I'm glad that anyone liked them I wasn't sure people would and anyway just thanks and You Don't is my fav to.

[Snappy1010]

I know you were mad but I just couldn't show them yet you understand and I'm happy that your happy.

yeah, i understand.

[SuperNatural1901]

^^^^^ That's great Rachel! lol!

[Snappy1010]

Hey everyone well I have been writing poems and I have alot more but I haven't typed them yet so here are just my first hope y'all like em'

You Don?t

You don?t see me
How I see you
You see only a person
Not what?s hiding inside
But I see you
I see right through you
I see your heart
And I see how much you care
But you don?t see me.

I see you when no one else does
I see the pain in your eyes and the agony in your heart
But you don?t see me.

I can hear you. Can you hear me?
I can hear the whispers and the silence that you hide
But you don?t hear me.

I see you talking with people but they don?t hear you
They only see they don?t listen.

I listen? I listen to everything you say
But you don?t listen to me.

I can see you
But you don?t see me



   Secret

I have a secret
Buried deep inside
It?s a secret no one knows
It?s my secret
That I?ll never tell
It?s a very well kept secret
That you?ll never guess
I?m by you and you can?t tell
That I have a secret
That you don?t know
I?m keeping it from you
In fear of what you might think
Of what you might say
I?ve known this secret for awhile now
But you don?t know
I?ve wanted to speak
I?ve wanted to tell you my secret
For so long now
But I can?t?
I can?t say it out loud
I can only say it in my head
But when I?m alone
Far from you
Out of site from everyone
I allow my secret to escape my lips
I love you.

   I Fell

You told me everything
And I fell for it
I fell for all your stories that you have told a hundred times
I fell hitting the ground hard
Impossible to move
Impossible to get up
Impossible to heal
I told you everything
I told you my secrets
I told you what was hidden deep inside
I told you what no one else knew
And you do this to me
You lied?
You lied straight to my face
You told me every line in the book
And I fell for each one
I fell for your smile, your eyes, your voice.
And you do this to me
I saw you with her
And you claim that ?she was just a friend?
But I know the truth
I know what you have been doing behind my back
And I have to do this
I can?t pretend nothing is wrong anymore
My heart breaks more everyday
But I have to do this
In time I know I can mend my broken heart
You say you love me and that you need me
I know it?s true
But I can?t be apart of this anymore
I have to do this for me
I have to go?
I have to leave you forever

Hey everyone well I have been writing poems and I have alot more but I haven't typed them yet so here are just my first hope y'all like em'

You Don?t

You don?t see me
How I see you
You see only a person
Not what?s hiding inside
But I see you
I see right through you
I see your heart
And I see how much you care
But you don?t see me.

I see you when no one else does
I see the pain in your eyes and the agony in your heart
But you don?t see me.

I can hear you. Can you hear me?
I can hear the whispers and the silence that you hide
But you don?t hear me.

I see you talking with people but they don?t hear you
They only see they don?t listen.

I listen? I listen to everything you say
But you don?t listen to me.

I can see you
But you don?t see me



   Secret

I have a secret
Buried deep inside
It?s a secret no one knows
It?s my secret
That I?ll never tell
It?s a very well kept secret
That you?ll never guess
I?m by you and you can?t tell
That I have a secret
That you don?t know
I?m keeping it from you
In fear of what you might think
Of what you might say
I?ve known this secret for awhile now
But you don?t know
I?ve wanted to speak
I?ve wanted to tell you my secret
For so long now
But I can?t?
I can?t say it out loud
I can only say it in my head
But when I?m alone
Far from you
Out of site from everyone
I allow my secret to escape my lips
I love you.

   I Fell

You told me everything
And I fell for it
I fell for all your stories that you have told a hundred times
I fell hitting the ground hard
Impossible to move
Impossible to get up
Impossible to heal
I told you everything
I told you my secrets
I told you what was hidden deep inside
I told you what no one else knew
And you do this to me
You lied?
You lied straight to my face
You told me every line in the book
And I fell for each one
I fell for your smile, your eyes, your voice.
And you do this to me
I saw you with her
And you claim that ?she was just a friend?
But I know the truth
I know what you have been doing behind my back
And I have to do this
I can?t pretend nothing is wrong anymore
My heart breaks more everyday
But I have to do this
In time I know I can mend my broken heart
You say you love me and that you need me
I know it?s true
But I can?t be apart of this anymore
I have to do this for me
I have to go?
I have to leave you forever

so my mom just read them, and she thinks "You Don't," the first one, is about me. and now i wanna know, is it? i thought it was about a guy. lol. just wondering!

[SuperNatural1901]

Don't worry It's not about you Rach.

[Thera]

Great poems Mel, i love them, i love them all, "You Don't" and "Secret" are cool, i know exactly what you mean, people only look at the outside, but mostly they forget about the true inside of people and that's how people hurt other people mostly, cuz they don't know how they feel inside, but great poems, i can't wait to read some new ones

[Matt]

awesome poems dude!

[SuperNatural1901]

Great poems Mel, i love them, i love them all, "You Don't" and "Secret" are cool, i know exactly what you mean, people only look at the outside, but mostly they forget about the true inside of people and that's how people hurt other people mostly, cuz they don't know how they feel inside, but great poems, i can't wait to read some new ones

Thanks so much Thera it means alot cause you write awesome poems so to say that i write good poems it's just it means alot and i'm trying to write new ones and I'll post them when I'm done.

awesome poems dude!

Thanks glad ya liked them.

[Thera]

Thanks so much Thera it means alot cause you write awesome poems so to say that i write good poems it's just it means alot and i'm trying to write new ones and I'll post them when I'm done.

"Thanks so much Thera it means alot cause you write awesome poems so to say that i write good poems it's just it means alot" < you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah WOW, ya'll act like i'm like the best poet here on Kellyville, lol well, i'm glad to hear that it means a lot to you when i say to you that you write good poems, but it's true, you write good poems and you write good stories "and i'm trying to write new ones and I'll post them when I'm done." < that's cool, i can't wait to read them, and that's cool that you post them when you're done

[SuperNatural1901]

Hey everyone I have a much needed update:
My first poem is dedicated to my two best friends SoxRoxKelly a.k.a Julia and Snappy1010 a.k.a Rachel I hope y'all like it!

Sisters
You are my best friend
My best friend till the end
You always know when something?s not right
You know when I?m happy and sad
You know just what to say to make me smile
You know when I have a secret
And I know when you have one too.
We fight
We argue
But it never matters in the end
Who?s guy is hotter (Dean?s totally hotter than the hottest)
We love the same things
And laugh at the same jokes
We see the same colors
And hear the same notes
We sing together
We laugh together
We cry together
We tell stories
We finish each others sentences
We yell
We?re weird
We?re outsiders
We?re DORKS!!!
And our relationship is more than that
More than friends
More than best friends
We?re sisters
And I love you both
I am a dork but I rather be a dork with you two then be one by myself

This next poem is dedicated to the very one and only DieHArdKellyFan a.k.a Thera... Thera thanks for being such a great friend and actually reading my fanfic and poems...

Angel

To a lovely Angel
One who?s a great friend
One who tries to read what everyone has to say
One who?s kind
Yeah that?s the word kind
One who loves Maybe
To the one who is always reading my fanfic
To the one who?s the top poster
And to the one that sings
To the one that writes
To the one who has her own sub-forum
To the one with the AWESOME BLEND!!!
To the one that paints
To my rambling buddy
And to the one that put me in her book
Thera your awesome
Thera you?re a great friend
Thera you?re an Angel

And here's two more updates for y'all

Wish upon a star

Wish upon a star
To try and guess what you can?t see
Wish upon a star
To try and get what you can?t have
Wish upon a star
To try and see what no one can foresee
Wish upon a star
To see your love
Wish upon a star
For another place, fate, destiny
Wish upon a star
To gain nothing
For how can you gain anything
When you already have everything

I know

There?s someone I know very well
I see him everyday
But he has no idea
That I know
That I know
I know his secret
That he tried to hide from everyone
I know his thoughts
Before he thinks
I know his words
Before he speaks
I know
What no one else knows
I know
What he feels
I know
Where he?s coming from
But I have a secret of my own
?I don?t love you like you love me?
But how can I tell him?

Hope y'all like em'

Thera thanks for reading and I think your poems are AWESOME!!!! your really good a writing them and i can't wait till your next update.