Topic: Update: 12-22-07

[SuperNatural1901]

Dear Mell... Your last three songs... those lyrics... You always rewrite with talent  from your heart to your readers hearts...  You have skill to put emotions into beauty sentences... and I thank you for proving it all the time... write on... you heal wounds... maybe you can save someones soul... At least you can try... at least the most important part is that writting helps you... eh... I am glad I met you... I am happy I will never forget you... no matter what stays behind doors of coming days... your talent is a magic gem... and I have faith and trust in your light... shine on... I can say...

OMG Robert... I always look forward to reading your comments... there so good and I thank you for reading my poems and commenting on them

those are amazing i lvoe beautiful eyes really fits me rightnow.and written as a rose it beautiful.i love it.that also may fit my life in the future..lets hope not though..keep it up!

Thanks abbs... I'm glad you liked them and I also hope "Written As a Rose" doesn't fit your life either.... 

[kelzduckadork66]

^^well if it does ever its okay because ppl come adn leave for erasons...and i cant control it all the time....but whatever..!lol

[SuperNatural1901]

Yeah... and it's good to have an attitude like that lol...

[kelzduckadork66]

i try my best.lol..i got stay positive with all the crap thats going on

[SuperNatural1901]

yeah... well that's all you can really do...

[kelzduckadork66]

yeppers

[SuperNatural1901]

Well here's an update hope y'all like it:

May The Best One Win
There

[kelzduckadork66]

wow i really like those.....very nice mel..very nice

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Oh... *May the best one win* is like gentle description of some serious competition... I hope nobody will really get hurt... I take title as promiss of fair end... but... I am about to say that the poem shows it in beauty way... despite that I am afraid what can really happen... uh... may the best one win... just as you say so...
Awww... haha... *Maybe* is the most romantic poem I did read in... ummm... nearest time... sorry for my dorkiness... hehe... but I really like this one the same as Kelly song... eh... write on Mel... you put on knees... I am serious ... Your talent is terrific... (this part you don't have to understand ->)wear your wings with pride Angel