Topic: Update: 12-22-07

[SuperNatural1901]

Thanks Rachel I like how you say so little lol!!!!

 "hey MelDork, i love the new updates, they are amazing, they really really touched me  you know i've got a question, this may sound a bit weird, but are these 2 poems about me? it just felt like they were about me, but i think that i'm just weird, haha  well i love them, they're amazing, love ya MelDork"

Well to tell you the truth Thera I don't really know what there about I can't even remember writing the untitled one it was so long ago and "Gone" that is really kinda about my life and for pretty much everyone who had a bad childhood that feels that way so yeah in a way the first one is about you if you feel that way.
~MelDork!
Posted on: February 17, 2007, 04:18:28 AMOkay so heres a brand new poem for y'all

My Place
A scenery so beautiful you would think your dreaming
Evergreens and Poppies
Butterflies and Fairies
People can only imagine how this place is
No one can see it
It?s my special place
A place where all your worries melt away from your mind
Where all you can see is beauty
Where all you can breathe is serenity
Where all you can hear is the soft running of the river
And all you can feel is soft grass beneath your toes
A place you can only see
A place that is different to everyone
But I know that no place in the world is like this
Because this is my place

Hope ya like more will come sortly
~MelDork!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Mel. I think you are a shy person, or at least you used to be . Anyway making breakthrough by posting poems to open yourself to others is the one of the best ways I know . Shyness is a power, because you are more careful for others and what you do... and making yourself opened for others is a sacrifice that is always appreciate . Writting poem about yourself as someone else... hmmmm... thanks for remembering it. Thera is wright you are very good poet. Practise makes master... so keep on finding new inspiration...

[Thera]

Well to tell you the truth Thera I don't really know what there about I can't even remember writing the untitled one it was so long ago and "Gone" that is really kinda about my life and for pretty much everyone who had a bad childhood that feels that way so yeah in a way the first one is about you if you feel that way.
~MelDork!
Posted on: February 17, 2007, 04:18:28 AMOkay so heres a brand new poem for y'all

"Well to tell you the truth Thera I don't really know what there about I can't even remember writing the untitled one it was so long ago and "Gone" that is really kinda about my life and for pretty much everyone who had a bad childhood that feels that way so yeah in a way the first one is about you if you feel that way." < ow okay, well that's cool though, that i can relate to it btw i love your new poem, i also can relate to this one, i think i also wrote a poem like this, only then diffrent because you wrote this one and i wrote my one, haha but i really love it i can't wait for the next update, you're an amazing writer

[SuperNatural1901]

Dear Mel. I think you are a shy person, or at least you used to be . Anyway making breakthrough by posting poems to open yourself to others is the one of the best ways I know . Shyness is a power, because you are more careful for others and what you do... and making yourself opened for others is a sacrifice that is always appreciate . Writting poem about yourself as someone else... hmmmm... thanks for remembering it. Thera is wright you are very good poet. Practise makes master... so keep on finding new inspiration...

Oh wow thanks so much I guess and you got that I'm shy from my poem??? Wow i never would have guessed that lol  and i'm going to keep practicing and i'm trying to find new inspiration
~MelDork!

"Well to tell you the truth Thera I don't really know what there about I can't even remember writing the untitled one it was so long ago and "Gone" that is really kinda about my life and for pretty much everyone who had a bad childhood that feels that way so yeah in a way the first one is about you if you feel that way." < ow okay, well that's cool though, that i can relate to it btw i love your new poem, i also can relate to this one, i think i also wrote a poem like this, only then diffrent because you wrote this one and i wrote my one, haha but i really love it i can't wait for the next update, you're an amazing writer

Thanks Thera and I'm glad that you could relate to my poems it means I'm writing something worthwhile lol and any way thanks so much and I'm going to try and update this week sometime
~Much Love
~MelDork!

[Thera]

Thanks Thera and I'm glad that you could relate to my poems it means I'm writing something worthwhile lol and any way thanks so much and I'm going to try and update this week sometime
~Much Love
~MelDork!

you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah for that i can relate to your poems, but they just are so amazing and you're always writing something worthwhile you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah, that will be awesome that you're going to update sometime this week, i can't wait for that btw did Robert also made ya speechless? he's great in making people speechless, cuz he also made me freakin speechless, lol love ya

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Mell .I think being never really content of own creation is a good value, because it means care, hunger for perfection, fallowing path to it ... Maybe it simple means being artist . Who really knows? I am just glad for being like you, having the same need and the same idea to fulfil it ... Something is special in this feeling, but its... speechless , timeless, escaping from my comprehension like love ... Its like understanding purpose of life and knowing need for living stronger, as strong as we can... Maybe... strength to live can be also yours inspiration, dear Mell ... And if you had a chance to know me absolutely as I am you would know that I can be the LOL ?est lol of all lol?s of this world ... at least for short moment ...

[SuperNatural1901]

you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah for that i can relate to your poems, but they just are so amazing and you're always writing something worthwhile you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah, that will be awesome that you're going to update sometime this week, i can't wait for that btw did Robert also made ya speechless? he's great in making people speechless, cuz he also made me freakin speechless, lol love ya

Hey Thera Thanks and thanks for sying that I write something worth while it means alot and I'm working on a new poems so yeah it's not quite finished yet so yeah but I'll try and post soon . And Robert did make me speechless I never had any one tell me that before lol
Sing Hard Ride Hard Die Hard Kelly Fan
Much Love Thera
~MelDork!

Dear Mell .I think being never really content of own creation is a good value, because it means care, hunger for perfection, fallowing path to it ... Maybe it simple means being artist . Who really knows? I am just glad for being like you, having the same need and the same idea to fulfil it ... Something is special in this feeling, but its... speechless , timeless, escaping from my comprehension like love ... Its like understanding purpose of life and knowing need for living stronger, as strong as we can... Maybe... strength to live can be also yours inspiration, dear Mell ... And if you had a chance to know me absolutely as I am you would know that I can be the LOL ?est lol of all lol?s of this world ... at least for short moment ...

Wow thanks so much and I get what you mean.. I mean when I write like either poems or my fanfic it's just something I have to do I need to write it's a form of clearing my head and I wouldn't be able to live with out it. And the way i get my inspiration is just amazing to me and i like how i can get inspiration from anything... I can't write poems like you at least not yet but I'll try and keep working at it.

Okay so I am going to update today and this poem I wrote for my mom because it's her birthday on Saturday so this is what I wrote for her

To Mother
To the mother I received when I was young
To the mother who dried my tears and helped me conquer my fears
To the mother who has been with me through pain and happiness
Through thick and thin
To the mother that I tell my secrets to
To the mother who is a mother
To the mother I call my own
To my best friend?
I Love You Mom, Happy Birthday!
~Love Always,
Mal

Okay so yeah and your probably wondering about Mal well my name is Mallory but I go by Mel so yeah ya can just call me Mel
Hope Ya liked it
~MelDork!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Mallory (I like sound of your name) ... I want to say thanks for the thanks, but... I feel terribly silly from this sentence , so... I think I shall better say that you made me speechless ... and I believe that your mum got that shining smile from your gift ... I believe, because you make me smile too ... even not once ... thanks kindly Mell

[SuperNatural1901]

Hey Robert thanks for the feedback it's much appreciated "(I like sound of your name) >>>>Thanks I've never had anyone say they liked the sound of my name before so thanks. And your right my mom loved her poem she's getting it framed lol Well anyways thanks for all you've said
~MelDork!

[Snappy1010]

My Place
A scenery so beautiful you would think your dreaming
Evergreens and Poppies
Butterflies and Fairies
People can only imagine how this place is
No one can see it
It?s my special place
A place where all your worries melt away from your mind
Where all you can see is beauty
Where all you can breathe is serenity
Where all you can hear is the soft running of the river
And all you can feel is soft grass beneath your toes
A place you can only see
A place that is different to everyone
But I know that no place in the world is like this
Because this is my place

Hope ya like more will come sortly
~MelDork!

that's beautiful Mel! i don't remember reading that one!!!


my mouse isn't working well, so i can't really copy the one you made for your mom, but i know she'll love it! (obviously, cause u said she already got it!) lol. i love it Mel, you should write a book of poems! ur way good at it!!! -Rachel

[Thera]

hey Amazing Angel MelDork, i love your new poem about your mother, i'm sure she was very happy with it and my she even let a tear fall or how much you touched her with your poem, well i love the poem and again you're an amazing writer, please update soon, love ya lots

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Mell , did you hear Rachel and Thera !? Its the way to go . Fallow by good people flow!

[SuperNatural1901]

that's beautiful Mel! i don't remember reading that one!!!


my mouse isn't working well, so i can't really copy the one you made for your mom, but i know she'll love it! (obviously, cause u said she already got it!) lol. i love it Mel, you should write a book of poems! ur way good at it!!! -Rachel

Thanks Rachel so so so much it means alot
Posted on: March 10, 2007, 10:05:49 PM

hey Amazing Angel MelDork, i love your new poem about your mother, i'm sure she was very happy with it and my she even let a tear fall or how much you touched her with your poem, well i love the poem and again you're an amazing writer, please update soon, love ya lots

Thanks Thera and my mom did love her poem it was like the best gift lol anyway thanks so much and i'll try and update soon!

Mell , did you hear Rachel and Thera !? Its the way to go . Fallow by good people flow!

Thanks Robert that's super lol

~MelDOrk!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

 

[SuperNatural1901]

^^^Those are awesome smilies Robert lol^^^