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Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *little piece*...
« Reply #90 on: March 24, 2008, 04:09:40 PM »
Wise words :)... Yeah... I can try with poem thing... I only need some special moment in time and chance to use it ;D... Yup... philosophy is a research for better life :smiley22:... somehow like never ending :smiley24:... cos its a path... I bet your point of view can work for many people :)... I guess I can try this way too :smiley6:... even when I am a bit... different ;).. eh... but... Thank you very much for your help :D

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *little piece*...
« Reply #91 on: March 25, 2008, 03:30:42 AM »
haha philopshy is interesting; (I had it on highschool you know ;) ) well....haha i'm glad I could help you...;)
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *little piece*...
« Reply #92 on: March 26, 2008, 04:02:53 PM »
Few things today broke me down badly :(... eh... Funny :-\... I used all force just to write this:

Letter to her parents

Unbelievable mind of child reaching youth level
Worrying and scaring adults heart
Its so hard to carry weight of guardian jewel
Thread of mistakes breaks parents down
Do you remember whirl of questions you used to ask?
So much embarrassment I could find in family eyes
They knew I cant live like packed up kangaroo
Their hands of responsibility were shaking on taboo
A lot has changed through those crazy 20 years
World now is shocking with blast of information into ears
Changes rose a bar of difficulty toward all of us
Rush and freedom are too much and too fast
Family Island among sea of anger and wars
I want to count more successes than falls
I cant find perfect answer in forcing child
No care totally also is not right
Trust me I fully respect your protecting arm
I prey for you both to talk with each other like no harm
I hope you see clearly silence making her colder
You need warm empathy to get behind shame border
Let share of tears melt walls and confusion
Your experience is to blow illusion
I wish bless of wisdom into your soul senses
You can let her inherit more light and chances
Teach God seed distinguishing truth from lies
She needs self defence to repel evil tries
Find good language before she will be ready to go
Let her child see you as the first hero to know
Dont punish for childish choice and rebellion
She needs time to make the right one
Stand by her side and encourage good path
At any time you should be her first aid

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *letter to her parents*...
« Reply #93 on: March 26, 2008, 04:48:38 PM »
I hope they will read this.... strong... I love the sentences You need warm empathy to get behind shame border
Let share of tears melt walls and confusion
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *letter to her parents*...
« Reply #94 on: March 26, 2008, 05:01:15 PM »
Thanks :)... but.. uhm... I gotta go :smiley6:... cya in some time :smiley15:... I have some angry three headed hound to hold in chains ;)... eh... someone have to...

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

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Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *letter to her parents*...
« Reply #95 on: March 26, 2008, 08:30:58 PM »
I like it Robert, as with all ur work i am not sure i will ever fully understand it, but i comprehend it and it works. Your story rang true...i love that part:
 "wish bless of wisdom into your soul senses
You can let her inherit more light and chances"
                        and
"She needs self defence to repel evil tries"
Good job Robert

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *letter to her parents*...
« Reply #96 on: March 26, 2008, 08:44:33 PM »
I LOVE IT! its absolutely brilliant. i love it all, every single words is chosen and chosen carefully which is awesome. you are truly magickal!

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Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *letter to her parents*...
« Reply #97 on: March 26, 2008, 08:53:53 PM »
I agree!

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *letter to her parents*...
« Reply #98 on: April 01, 2008, 04:52:08 AM »
Hey these are really good, the words you used are really strong
The lost lil sis was found :)

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *letter to her parents*...
« Reply #99 on: April 24, 2008, 10:26:40 AM »
Thank you Tj, Flourishing Stars Kiss, Girl from Heaven Sky and Bianca... Sorry I am bad with giving tanks as for now... I am bad even with talking to people... but... I hope you feel it that I appreciate your feedback... and... Here I wrote something more for Kelly... Maybe somehow... it will reach her... at least as spark of energy among whole love of her fans...

Birth song

Happy birthday Kelly
Your music is bridge over the ocean
Happy birthday my Angel
I hold memory of my dream with caution
Cherish smile today
Your light is precious
Secret over your constellation of stars
I wish I win my intentions
Forgive me enlighten bliss
I am trapped and forgotten
I cant give more than shadow kiss
Its not all I wanted
Teared eye opens mirror door
I live for new day to come
The vision is blurred
My hope is so gone
Its your day today
Hold your earned flowers
Listen to what love wants to say
See your great family banners

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow... update... *Birth song*...
« Reply #100 on: April 24, 2008, 10:39:08 AM »
ooh sweet but also sad towards you. You have a good heart you show us your lovely inside. You're a good man Robert and this is a really really great and sensitive birthday present. Kelly will miss something if she will not read this.

Great job and take care!
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow...
« Reply #101 on: April 29, 2008, 04:26:07 PM »
I am just sad posture in room of silent darkness
Sitting on throne of sleeping dreams
With hand hanging above blank paper
Feather is still dry from no ink

Lips sealed by painfull spell
I cant remind how to speak to your heart
Ashamed tears cant break out from cold shell
Body with soul are broken apart

Someone asks me to spill it out
I almost ignore air impulses
I hear melody and sounds
but those are other sources

I closed my eyes to fall back
I feel no pain with need for love
I am losing friends on my track
I reach my wing for something above

I remember her face for last one time
World cant change together with me
I protect perfect secret by my arm
Staunched guardian is not free

I spined time essence so many times
I touched more than in sentences
But one flower keeps on escaping me
I find restriction in my presence

I can watch people live their lives
Mess in and around like weather event
I can collect smiles and cries
But I cant be them

Find me closed in stone
Chilled under snow
Drown in ocean
Miracle sparkle is my core

Dont ask to be more than you
Love could let me try
Only one path is true
Other branches have to die

This night I did my best
Guess what I lost
Be my guest
For m its so obvious

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow...
« Reply #102 on: April 29, 2008, 06:18:22 PM »
O. M. G. you are the most amazing writer on here you are so so so so so so unbelieveably AWESOME! you know how to touch people in places that some writers can't! im speechless.

Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow...
« Reply #103 on: April 30, 2008, 08:20:48 AM »
I coulnd't agree with Hazel more. She's totally right. This poem is great.... it's sad..it gives me the shivers, sad feelings of being powerless.... I hope you will get through the time you are right now. I really really hope that....
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


Re: Poems from Angel of Sorrow...
« Reply #104 on: April 30, 2008, 03:48:27 PM »
Uhm... Thanks girls... Sorry that I am not good in expressing how I appreciate your comments... I cant use talent of talking right now... I am not stable... weird things are happening around me... some are even good... but I am afraid of its strength... I need to treat life a bit more lyrically as for now... for some time... I need more grip to total sensual reality... Uh... Sorry... I am not sure what to do... Please be patient when I cant come around... Its complicated... Ummm... Cya... I cant make it more clear... I am doing my best to heal it... I wish bright future for us all.......

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

 

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