Topic: Kristine's songs and poems **Update...finally** [8/22/07]

[Kelly_for_life]

Okay...go easy on me...I've been writing songs for a little while and--with some encouragment--I've decided to post them. 

Okay...here we go...

Different Story

I'm waiting for an answer
I'm waiting for a thought
I know what you want
But, I can't give that to you

I'm not perfect
Not like you want me to be
I gotta take my own road
A road that leads to...

Chorus
A different story
The one I'll write
Different story
The one of my mind
Different story
Gotta do what's best for me
That's why this is my
Different story

You're waiting for a fault
You're waiting for a break
Can't tell you this isn't true
'Cause it's from my heart

You're waiting for something
But, I won't anymore
I gotta go on with my life
Whether you're coming or not

Chorus

Gotta know what it takes
Gotta know how to get there
I know the truth, now
How about you?

I know what it takes
And I know how to get there
You know the truth, now
So, what should you do?

Chorus x2 But, a little different
A different story
The one we'll write
Different story
The one of our minds
Different story
Gotta do what's best for us
That's why this could be our
Different story...


Wow...to think I almost wrote that a year ago...5/3/06...it's amazing what looking at the past will do to your outlook on your life today...

Okay...state y'all's opinions...i'm ready...

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

  Your song seems to be great introduction like anthem of whole album ... If it makes you blush... let me burn from it into ash... Crash us by your talent and creation... I wait for next ones with tension ...

[I-am-@ddicted]

wow, we had another hidden talent amoung us I loved it and I actually made a tune for it almost immediately, so thats really good!!

I hope you write more and your right it is amazing how you write something so long ago and your outlook has either changed or stayed the same ... Good work!

~Trina

[Kelly_for_life]

Your song seems to be great introduction like anthem of whole album ... If it makes you blush... let me burn from it into ash... Crash us by your talent and creation... I wait for next ones with tension ...

I never thought of that...an anthem of an album...
now that I look at it again...it does seem that way!
Thanks for the beautiful comment!

wow, we had another hidden talent amoung us I loved it and I actually made a tune for it almost immediately, so thats really good!!

I hope you write more and your right it is amazing how you write something so long ago and your outlook has either changed or stayed the same ... Good work!

~Trina

Another talent?? No not me...I'm just a simple writer that's all...
You are way better than I am!
So is Thera and Sandra (supergirl)
And other people I haven't had the pleasure of meeting yet!

But, thank you for the comment!
It means a lot!

[hyrpgmt]

wow thats really good!! 

[Kelly_for_life]

Thanks for all the feedback guys!
I really do appreciate it!!
I was really nervous posting but I think I'm alright now...

Here's the second installment...in memory of one of my closest friends...

I Don't Care

Around myself
Around my mind
Around my feelings,
So what did I find?

Something inside of me
Is growing, the light of me
I don't see you
Anymore

Chorus
I don't care
You've broken the life of me
I was dying inside, you see
I don't care
Let's take our separate paths
Don't wanna live the aftermath
I don't care
I don't care
About you

Going in circles
I didn't know what to do
Now that I've seen the light,
I've gotta move

Something inside of me
Is growing the light of me
I don't need you
Anymore

Chorus

Don't call
And don't come by
Then you ask me why

I was sick of being in the dark
Now, it's time to make my mark
And I can finally say
No more of your darn ways!

I don't care
You've broken the light of me
Now it's all dead, you see
I have no regrets!

Chorus x2

I don't care x4
Now it's all dead you see
I have no regrets...

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Ohhhh... once again I would like to hear this song ... It seems to be perfect expression of your emotions ... No chance to deny ... You are TALENT ... And I believe you have much more for us to see ...

[I-am-@ddicted]

wow I got a kinda Never Again feel with this one ... another great song!!

and In the other comment you replied to mine with! Thank you for calling me a good writer! and no one is better then anyone else ... we are all equal! and yes I agree Sandra, Thera and Robert are amazing writers!! Thats why I love it here, so much talent in one forum, its crazy lol

anyway another amazing song

~Trina xx

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

WHOOO child I am speechless darlin
That made me speechless that was awesome...mosst more kris that was awesome!!


~!!~!!~!!~Breanne~!!~!!~!!~

[Kelly_for_life]

Ohhhh... once again I would like to hear this song ... It seems to be perfect expression of your emotions ... No chance to deny ... You are TALENT ... And I believe you have much more for us to see ...

Thanks Robert!
This song was difficult to write
Basically, it was a friendship turning bad...

wow I got a kinda Never Again feel with this one ... another great song!!

and In the other comment you replied to mine with! Thank you for calling me a good writer! and no one is better then anyone else ... we are all equal! and yes I agree Sandra, Thera and Robert are amazing writers!! Thats why I love it here, so much talent in one forum, its crazy lol

anyway another amazing song

~Trina xx

Dude, I know right?
There is some amazing talent on this board!!!

Never Again...maybe not...lol...great video through...i loved it!!!

WHOOO child I am speechless darlin
That made me speechless that was awesome...mosst more kris that was awesome!!


~!!~!!~!!~Breanne~!!~!!~!!~

Breanne!!!!
You finally posted!!!
Yeah, you like them!!

Thanks for telling me to post these...for giving the encouragement...


I promise guys...I'll update when I get home from school...yeah, i love school...not...haha

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

girl i am so going to update my story for you after reading these!!

~!!~!!~!!~Breanne~!!~!!~!!~

[Kelly_for_life]

Be Still

Something you love
Something you see
It slips like it isn't there

Something so pure
Something so hard
It goes into dark

Something so beautiful
Becoming so black
Becoming so empty

Chorus
Be still my darlin
Be still my friend
It was only a dream
A dream with no end
Wake up your heart
Wake up your mind
Be still my darlin
Be still

Something so cold
Something so dead
You believe what you see

Something so lifeless
But, you still believe
In possiblities

Something has a spark
Becoming so dim
Becoming so faint

Chorus

Be still my darlin x2
Be still my friend
Wake up your heart
There is an end

Chorus

Be still x4

Something so pure
Something so hard
Something so cold
Something beginning to dim...

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

i am the first to post about about htis and it is awesome and no lies..the reast of what i shall be still!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Be Still

Something you love
Something you see
It slips like it isn't there

Something so pure
Something so hard
It goes into dark

Something so beautiful
Becoming so black
Becoming so empty

Chorus
Be still my darlin
Be still my friend
It was only a dream
A dream with no end
Wake up your heart
Wake up your mind
Be still my darlin
Be still

Something so cold
Something so dead
You believe what you see

Something so lifeless
But, you still believe
In possiblities

Something has a spark
Becoming so dim
Becoming so faint

Chorus

Be still my darlin x2
Be still my friend
Wake up your heart
There is an end

Chorus

Be still x4

Something so pure
Something so hard
Something so cold
Something beginning to dim...

Beautiful words thread into verses... they just cry for sounds to make them more alive... When Sun rises light is waking up... but not for my broken heart... I look for cure... in poems... in songs... I thank for all that shine with light...

[Kelly_for_life]

It is light, I believe, that gives us all hope...everyone goes through darkness...but, there is always light...somewhere.. .even if you can't see it... :'(

I was wondering about this today...during my classes...I always think more deeply when it's dark and when it's rainy too...

Thank you all for the beautiful comments!!
I'll be alright soon...just a little depressed...if I'm still awake thinking, I'll write and post it...



Oh yeah! Did you know that Kelly has a song called 'Be Still' on 'My December'?
I found out when Fayal posted an interview!
Weird...Kelly and I have a shared song title...I wonder how her's goes...