Topic: my poem of paulf

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

This is my poem i told paulf i would write
so i shall right it right
paulf oh yes how can i explain
oh he writes about alot of pain
all the bad in the world
it makes my stomach quirl
to see how the world is
makes me think what did i miss?
But paulf is a great writer
and he is a true fighter
he brings life to his work
that truely leave a mark
but also make a spark
and his work is like a butterfly
gliding through the sky
From now on he shall be called Glider
The magnificent fighter!

[paulf]

wow im lost for words thanks alot im greatfull

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

no problem paul...hey can you be kind enough to post some of your poems here so i can read them becuse i dont really search  for people poems unless i think they are really goodso.....i think you are really good soooo....thanx!

[paulf]

Will I elect?
We life a life of fear and terror but are we suppose to trust the people how started this mess, I fear that people think I?m harsh with my work but I wish they see the mess that they have foreseen, there?s a time in life when we have to choose between two political leaders which one will you choose to destroy the world, spectators say there are corrupt
Is this true only they know I made my decision not to elect would it have made any changes to them would the person how lost have won or would I have elected a new world murder this I don?t know what would it have been we will never know cause of what I did.

Don?t judge me
Don?t judge me by my harsh words I say I just want you to know what there didn?t want
You to Know and that the lies and destruction of there just war, the words I tell are fact
 Not Fiction if you chose to accept that you own decision but keep this in mind when you
 Sleep tonight I?m not the one you hate it the leaders that you chose to see and debate.


Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover
 
You never see it coming until it rushes you off your feet loves hard to find and people are even harder to seek, there are many around but do they see the sadness you fell when you miss a loved one you haven?t seen we have been through thick and thin and you know me well I love you but its time for you to go.

 Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven 
 Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven 

I miss you I need you here you helped me through lot of hard times like sickness and health and trouble I had got my self into, maybe you will walk with me through all of time next to me you say you will stay only time will tell, you said that there was nothing better than being in love but the hardest time are when you were down and lonely now your gone that exactly how I feel and here I stay thinking about the times we share

Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven 
Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven

I helped out when you need saving now all I need to know is that you?re safe in heaven
Maybe when this is over we will meet again but until that day I think off you and the love we shear.


Posted on: May 10, 2007, 10:11:34 AMThere?s life in everything we see
Just because it stands still it doesn?t have life. Life is around but what does it mean, come up with questions with no answers like why are we here today and what?s the purpose of life is it a quest or a mission we have to succeed or is the meaning of life something unseen like a trip off a life time or someone were meeting to see the words I speak are simple and fact where we go when it is over??.well I don?t know I don?t have the answers only the questions the questions that we all live with on our shoulders the purpose off my life is to spread good and bad to everyone who will listen.
Were I go from here I don?t know but I?m luck to have people hear to spread the word of love and hate which I shear 

Love is all I need
Something is in the air but I don?t care I have a ring of my love which I need to share from this dark man I will share some love foe the woman who shares my heart there?s a time in life where you feel this way when you Neel down and say those words love is the sign of faith the love you share with your soul mate

Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it
Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it

The time has come to say you vows this is the moment you lock your heart but in the end it will all be worth it because the love you will shear will be everlasting time passes but it feels like love is dieing but that no true you just need to know when your in love words are not you need but actions and symbols that you can express you self are also needed if you are soul mate then you will last forever till the time comes when you will both be in heaven but don?t think its over just then cause as you know heaven is only the start of your everlasting life   
 
  Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it
Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it the love I need is right next to me.

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

This is my poem i told paulf i would write
so i shall right it right
paulf oh yes how can i explain
oh he writes about alot of pain
all the bad in the world
it makes my stomach quirl
to see how the world is
makes me think what did i miss?
But paulf is a great writer
and he is a true fighter
he brings life to his work
that truely leave a mark
but also make a spark
and his work is like a butterfly
gliding through the sky
From now on he shall be called Glider
The magnificent fighter!

What can I say? What can I add? You deserved to be named Magnificent Fighter ... Breanne you are gorgeous ...

Your poems (All of them) are just powerful prove of it ... Still I think they are more like songs ... but I don't have such qualifications to judge ... when I am skilled only in poetry ...

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

Thank you robert I think you are gorgeous too!
My poems are more like songs because that is my method...
that is the way i express myself
it makes me happy to kow that my poetry is different from others
but stil my poetry is not a song it is a lesson
it is a way of telling what i feel inside and letting the world know

[paulf]

yeah i guess there more like songs or very long poems but anyway it dont bother me at least you like them.

Posted on: May 11, 2007, 09:59:50 AMheres an other on for you

 Maybe
I made this bed which I choose to lye in, live with my regrets sleep with what I saying could this be the end of everything I want now

Maybe I?m just scared to face the things I facing its easer to walk away from everything

Is anybody listing when call for help I don?t think I?m going to make it, I?m surrounded by these four wall and I don?t think I can go should I end it now I just need some help I?m just sitting here and I?m miles away I lock my self in these walls cause what people might Think

Maybe I?m just scared to face the things I facing its easer to walk away from everything

Is there anyone out there who knows how it feels just to be alone if there is then this is for you I just got to say I just want to love but 

 Maybe I?m just scared to face the things I facing its easer to walk away from everything

I have live something?s Id rather not mention and there are things that I might never tell threes also things ill take to my grave but I guess you don?t need to know I hate my self I?m constantly paranoid about everyone I meet but in the end there?s nothing you can do to change how I feel

Maybe I?m just scared to face the things I facing its easer to walk away from everything
Every one says that we are in gods hand and he has control but I pray that gods listing and he can here me say I need you to help me!!!!!
 

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

(happy dancing)......i love it..your writing is sooo powerful!

[paulf]

well as long as you like them i will keep writing them
Posted on: May 12, 2007, 02:57:05 PMWill you be?
Will you be there when it?s all over and done when my heart has gone and my love has finally shone, when I have no words will you be there still with me until we never see each other again would you be there. The love we share is strong and we both know it but that?s the half of it because if I can I will stay with you even when it?s all over.

Life?s life
Were told what we should eat health and not to drink but they make it so if they want us to stop they would have done it by now but we aren?t listing even if it bad for us we won?t listen and that?s life and how it is we are told how to live are life?s and what we should see but don?t listen to them because the cant see, they cant see that we are all human beings.

Fans
Ever since I stared writing these songs or poems or what ever you want to call them all I wanted to do is send a message a message that you are what you are and nothing can change it I?m thankful for all the support just know what you really are and never change for anyone not even you self I write about pain cause there?s nothing else if I can make you see maybe I can make everyone else see that where there?s love there is pain and the love I share is for all my fans.       
 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

I think "Fans" is my fav, but I am not good in picking the one ... and since whole your poems point well in aspects of life ... great job ... Heart, mind and soul ... as I say about sources of creation ...

[paulf]

cool what ever you think rob!!!!!!!
Posted on: May 12, 2007, 04:53:24 PMMum
This is a poem to my mother, mum you have been there all my life never judging what I do or say just want you to know that I love you loads and you will always be with me in my heart

Fighter
The definition of a fighter is some one fights against others but in many ways not just with your fists but with the words you say I have been classed as fighter by people I know because they know that I will never lie down not to any one how things there hard I will fight with words a much as I can but to let you know I will fight physically if I have no choice.

Respect
Respect has to be earned so as they say but you think I?m going to respect you with the things that you say I will respect you If you will respect me but as far as this story goes well you will have to wait and see???   

Life from scratch
If I could start from scratch I wouldn?t change a thing same street same friends same past and the same people I meet so I wouldn?t change any thing but that would be a lie cause I would change this pain and the people who have gone but in the end when that green line goes flat you couldn?t change that.   

Posted on: May 13, 2007, 03:17:41 PMhey you changed your name i wondered what happened.....what up with it?

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

cool what ever you think rob!!!!!!!
Posted on: May 12, 2007, 04:53:24 PMMum
This is a poem to my mother, mum you have been there all my life never judging what I do or say just want you to know that I love you loads and you will always be with me in my heart

Fighter
The definition of a fighter is some one fights against others but in many ways not just with your fists but with the words you say I have been classed as fighter by people I know because they know that I will never lie down not to any one how things there hard I will fight with words a much as I can but to let you know I will fight physically if I have no choice.

Respect
Respect has to be earned so as they say but you think I?m going to respect you with the things that you say I will respect you If you will respect me but as far as this story goes well you will have to wait and see???   

Life from scratch
If I could start from scratch I wouldn?t change a thing same street same friends same past and the same people I meet so I wouldn?t change any thing but that would be a lie cause I would change this pain and the people who have gone but in the end when that green line goes flat you couldn?t change that.   

Posted on: May 13, 2007, 03:17:41 PMhey you changed your name i wondered what happened.....what up with it?

Those are deep... great job Paul.... I wish they were in one place with others.. it took some time.. to find them...

[paulf]

ha so sorry i will try to keep them in the same place

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

ha so sorry i will try to keep them in the same place

Good to hear 

[NeverAgainwillIloveyou!]

its funny that yall keep posting in this one when..i actually forgot to even read it anymore...wow paul your poems are really good...hello robert