Topic: new poems!!! (please read!!)

[paulf]

Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover
 
You never see it coming until it rushes you off your feet loves hard to find and people are even harder to seek, there are many around but do they see the sadness you fell when you miss a loved one you haven?t seen we have been through thick and thin and you know me well I love you but its time for you to go.

 Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven 
 Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven 

I miss you I need you here you helped me through lot of hard times like sickness and health and trouble I had got my self into, maybe you will walk with me through all of time next to me you say you will stay only time will tell, you said that there was nothing better than being in love but the hardest time are when you were down and lonely now your gone that exactly how I feel and here I stay thinking about the times we share

Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven 
Goodbye my friend goodbye my lover forever I will miss you until we meet in heaven

I helped out when you need saving now all I need to know is that you?re safe in heaven
Maybe when this is over we will meet again but until that day I think off you and the love we shear.



short poem

Friend
My friends are there all the time on the phone or in person all ways ready to talk
 they never  judge me by the way I act even when I get crazy they don?t tell me to relax my friend and I are closer than close we all ways hang around when ever the time may be
we share a lot over the last 5 years and time is come where we may have to go our separate ways even though school is about to end I know we will meet maybe on the street corner in years to come friend are friend that?s how it is but you will always meet new people ever where you seem to be

You?re beautiful
You re beautiful in so many ways your eyes deep as the sea and your teeth white as the sheet that lies on my bed the lines on your face which make up your skin which is soft as can be, your indescribable to talk about so I say this you make up all the good in life and never ever seem to let me down I?m lucky to have you and I hope you fell the same
I write this poem to let you know that I love you and I would never let you down

Feeing to good
I?m feeling so good I phoned you just to get you over but I?m feeling that something got to go wrong because I?m feeling to dame good, everything?s well between us now but would it be the same if you know what I did when I was on tour with the band and when I toke all these pill that get me so higher than the sky, I live a life of sex drugs and rock n roll you knew this when you meet me but you didn?t that the time to see that I just a bad boy with needs.


Posted on: May 09, 2007, 03:53:06 PMWill I elect?
We life a life of fear and terror but are we suppose to trust the people how started this mess, I fear that people think I?m harsh with my work but I wish they see the mess that they have foreseen, there?s a time in life when we have to choose between two political leaders which one will you choose to destroy the world, spectators say there are corrupt
Is this true only they know I made my decision not to elect would it have made any changes to them would the person how lost have won or would I have elected a new world murder this I don?t know what would it have been we will never know cause of what I did.

Don?t judge me
Don?t judge me by my harsh words I just want you to know what there didn?t want you to
 Know and that the lies and destruction of there just war, the words I tell are fact not
 Fiction if you chose to accept that you own decision but keep this in mind when you
 Sleep to night I?m not the one you hate it the leaders that you chose to see

Posted on: May 09, 2007, 04:29:02 PMThere?s life in everything we see
Just because it stands still it doesn?t have life. Life is around but what does it mean, come up with questions with no answers like why are we here today and what?s the purpose of life is it a quest or a mission we have to succeed or is the meaning of life something unseen like a trip off a life time or someone were meeting to see the words I speak are simple and fact where we go when it is over??.well I don?t know I don?t have the answers only the questions the questions that we all live with on our shoulders the purpose off my life is to spread good and bad to everyone who will listen.
Were I go from here I don?t know but I?m luck to have people hear to spread the word of love and hate which I shear 

Love is all I need
Something is in the air but I don?t care I have a ring of my love which I need to share from this dark man I will share some love foe the woman who shares my heart there?s a time in life where you feel this way when you Neel down and say those words love is the sign of faith the love you share with your soul mate

Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it
Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it

The time has come to say you vows this is the moment you lock your heart but in the end it will all be worth it because the love you will shear will be everlasting time passes but it feels like love is dieing but that no true you just need to know when your in love words are not you need but actions and symbols that you can express you self are also needed if you are soul mate then you will last forever till the time comes when you will both be in heaven but don?t think its over just then cause as you know heaven is only the start of your everlasting life   
 
  Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it
Love is all I need not your hate love is all see so please don?t try and break me because I?m not worth it the love I need is right next to me.



Posted on: May 10, 2007, 10:48:15 AMwell i must admit there more like songs but if you like them please say iwoud like to know

[ericb]

those were incredible.and I don't say anything I don't mean.God bless.Please write more.

[paulf]

cool im in the middle of doing some so watch out for them
Posted on: May 12, 2007, 02:48:46 PMWill you be?
Will you be there when it?s all over and done when my heart has gone and my love has finally shone, when I have no words will you be there still with me until we never see each other again would you be there. The love we share is strong and we both know it but that?s the half of it because if I can I will stay with you even when it?s all over.

Life?s life
Were told what we should eat health and not to drink but they make it so if they want us to stop they would have done it by now but we aren?t listing even if it bad for us we won?t listen and that?s life and how it is we are told how to live are life?s and what we should see but don?t listen to them because the cant see, they cant see that we are all human beings.

Fans
Ever since I stared writing these songs or poems or what ever you want to call them all I wanted to do is send a message a message that you are what you are and nothing can change it I?m thankful for all the support just know what you really are and never change for anyone not even you self I write about pain cause there?s nothing else if I can make you see maybe I can make everyone else see that where there?s love there is pain and the love I share is for all my fans.       
 

Posted on: May 12, 2007, 03:26:44 PMMum
This is a poem to my mother, mum you have been there all my life never judging what I do or say just want you to know that I love you loads and you will always be with me in my heart

Fighter
The definition of a fighter is some one fights against others but in many ways not just with your fists but with the words you say I have been classed as fighter by people I know because they know that I will never lie down not to any one how things there hard I will fight with words a much as I can but to let you know I will fight physically if I have no choice.

Respect
Respect has to be earned so as they say but you think I?m going to respect you with the things that you say I will respect you If you will respect me but as far as this story goes well you will have to wait and see???   

Life from scratch
If I could start from scratch I wouldn?t change a thing same street same friends same past and the same people I meet so I wouldn?t change any thing but that would be a lie cause I would change this pain and the people who have gone but in the end when that green line goes flat you couldn?t change that.   

Posted on: May 13, 2007, 03:18:18 PMLast love
I?m broken in side and cant fix up, I hate you in side but I cant take this love I need and make it last because of the hate you make me feel, maybe ill find someone how will like me and love me for how I am but these days that?s hard to find as this hate spreads people die I cant goon living this lie. As life goes on you only drift apart I hate to think that?s the same for us but that?s how it is

My love will last only if you take me back, my love will live on only if you take me back  I swear I will never hurt you I never want it this way but I cant help that this pain take over me I don?t want it please help me

Our love can last but forget about my past the on reason you liked me was because the life I have been through but as time went on I saw in your eyes that loved change when you saw the man I was I loved you and you loved back I cared for you and you did to we share a lot in common and you know, if you stay with me you will se that               
       
Our love will last only if you take me back our love will live once again but this time for real I swear I will never hurt you and I will always be by your side.

Posted on: May 15, 2007, 01:16:05 PMUnderneath lays the ground and above are heads are the sky?s lost in time trying to find something you lost, like a loved one or a friend who has been lost in time and cant be found, I but I lie here and look at the stars get lost in the hands of time and wish I could just run away form this pain but I cant so in the end I lie here and think of you and the times we shared

Time can be lost and you can?t get it back so all we have is right now to make an impact

It seems every time we are together time just fly?s bye but all I want is for it to last for ever so I can stay in your arms and feel your warmth and not be left in the cold, where I hate my self, all I need is your love tonight so don?t get shut out where I cant feel any emotions except the darkness of the world and the world is so dame cruel
 
Time can be lost and you can?t get it back so all we have is right now to make an impact and love and look after the time were given so we can make a difference

How the hell did we wound up like scared to talk and let each other know how we really feel I just want to let you know how I really feel and what I need but when I?m tired of hating I will pass it on but right now all I want is for you to fell the same fell the same love I feel so I can have some good in side me

 Time can be lost and you can?t get it back so all we have is right now to make an impact and love and look after the time were given so we can make a difference

I wish you wouldn?t clench your fist and pack your suit case but there?s nothing I can say, but now were in the moment we could end up saying the things we have been meaning to say just know that one day we can work this out only  when time goes by

Posted on: May 16, 2007, 01:52:19 PMWhen you?re not around
I talk to you every night and day, but all I can think about is will I ever see you again, your always on the road, we always talk but that?s not enough I need you here, here with me and not I hundred mile away, every since you won that dame show I never see you it like your on the run and afraid
I?m saying this because when I?m with you there no one else, when can I see you maybe next month or year or not at all
You say your leaving once again it?s the same old but I need say on thing that just think of me when I?m not around and your on stage cause I?m the one who?s left alone, when your on the road your having the time of your life an I can see that but when you leave I stand here with that same old look on my face
I guess she me girlfriend and good enough but it?s not easy being wit a supermodel she?s always on the road I? always alone but when I think I must be lucky cause not everyone has someone like you

It seems
Just turned around look what happed I just left school and being told to get a job last five years have been all good but now I have to work 9 to 5, money is good but its not enough just lost some of my best friends I will ever have, I like to think that its only going to get better but we can all see that that not the way it seems like ever time I turn around a chapter of my life is gone and I cant seem to hold on. 16 and the world awaits but I?m to scared to see what I?m suppose to see I think about all these people in the high street and think just what do they do and what this world have for me?.
 
   

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Life ... so much hidden in this word ... you put a lot about you and your life in poems ... You have key in your hands to shine by it ... just keep on writting ...

[paulf]

will do will do

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

will do will do

 

[paulf]

Stuck up chicks
All I see is this these girls hanging round this place; it?s the same old stories on a different day of the week, makeup and surgery to hide the scares in side, because deep down in side they know there really not liked, they sleep all day and party all night,
And when there down they try to make you like everything they do and make because they know they have you on a leash and you believe everything they say, you can see them everywhere you go on the dance flour shouting out for more In the magazines in there fancy cloths but in the end you know there are all just users using you so they can make some more??, Paris and Lindsay you better watch you steps because I don?t feel those lies you spread around, you say you like to have some fun but in the end you?re the ones who?s washed up and all done. I?m sick of all these girls who think there so fine cant they see that there not liked, all we want is a little on the side so we can say we have been with some one who is hot in the end we will only just forget, so get up off your back and forget about this song? 

new life
 So this is it this is our world filled with all these feeling and places that people have never seen or felt, so I feel lost in a place filled with misery and once again I?m lost and can?t find my way back I?m running over the same ground over and over again I need something new in side so I don?t feel the same way that I have, I have felt your pain I have kissed you recently I have seen you in this world lost and confused and we felt the same way so our love has connected like the sun in the sky and the flowers in the ground we hold on through the pain and in the end where are all that?s left so let start a new world where there is only good and happiness??..                  

Posted on: May 24, 2007, 07:16:15 AMthis is the longest poem/song i have ever wrote what do you think

the life of a troubled punk
Nobody likes you, you stand here all alone wasting a night or two with a couple of drinks but days turn weeks and weeks turn to months until years has past and you aren?t doing anything with your life, you?re a alcoholic and a druggy and a low life and no one seems to care the troubles you have. The troubled family and the low grades so now you?re on the run from your self and you can?t turn back so this is your life the life of a homeless punk, you have a girl friend that?s hooked up on crack and a mate who?s got your back and a dealer to satisfy your ever need you think you got the life but if you look back you only realize you could have had better so this is this is your life what do you do now instead of smoking crack but its never to late to turn back

So you choose to run look at you now you?re a low life with no home but that can change
Just go home tell them what you really feel make then listen to you make them see the pain they made you feel what the worst that can happen you lived in the streets for 4 years of your life

You run home you run up to the front door your parents answer amazed your still alive
You look them in the face and shout out ?WHY DID YOU DO IT? why did you put me through it couldn?t you see what you did to me they stair at you pleading you to stop but you wont you got questions that wants answers and you want them now, they say there sorry but you don?t believe there stories because you know about her affair and you know about the cash he spent on strip clubs. You try to see past the problems but in the end you know it won?t work so you choose to run once again.

So you choose to run but you don?t what the life so you get a job and your own place you clean your self up and get some cash this is the start of your new life

Time passes and you take these songs you wrote and make a band and become icon stars your on the road and you only look back at your life and think why it had to be this way dissing your parents in every song you cant remember the last time you saw the ones you still love for time you kept the anger in side but now you found your anti drug that keeps you from shouting out, maybe one day you could see them a again tell them the things you saw when you were on tour or to tell them you still love them and that you forgive them but only time will tell because your now having the time of your life.         

Posted on: May 24, 2007, 12:35:56 PMTimes of our life?s
I have been looking for so long for the one how is right for me every where I turn all I see is people in pain cant they see that we need this love, to rain down on us to take us through the life?s we lead we need some happiness in our lives to remind us that we are real and that we all have to feel the disasters of this life   
I constantly feel like I cant go on but there?s someone out there that change that where they are I do not know but we need to believe in our souls that we can be save from this world and that we can have the times of our life?s,

But we can live in a world with out any pain feel the happiness that is foreseen and in the end we can have the times of our lives the time that feels right 

Every where I turn nothing seems to change it?s the same old stories on a different day of the week but in the end I know that we could have the times of our lives
All we need is the sunny days and no more pain no more poor and no more rain all the things that bring us down need to go away then we can live for today

 But we can live in a world with out any pain feel the happiness that is foreseen and in the end we can have the times of our lives the time that feels right

I used to think that nothing would go right then I saw the light and saw that it was all lies
Every one you meet will never be right hide behind false faces which hides all there lies
Never will you see the truth in side but time moved of and everything is right and now I?m having the time of my life   

Posted on: May 25, 2007, 01:14:21 PMSee these terrorists there all round, a bomb just went off in the middle of town in a bus, trains in the shops and in the cloths of a random guy there are all going off at the same time. My grandfather blood pressure was raised by that, reliving visions of the war and where he stood there when he saw the hate that he couldn?t control when everyone dropped to the flour and died

Can?t you see the pain that breeds thought these streets cant you see the hate that breeds
I cant move on from this hate that controls this place I cant break free from the visions I see  I?m stuck in a world of pain which I cant seem to shake is there anyone out there how can save me.

Were told to wait and see that the world will change but how many people needs to die before we see before we see that its gone to far so I pray tonight that we can see the pain that full?s us with hate and so we can finally move on and live in peace

Can?t you see the pain that breeds thought these streets cant you see the hate that breeds
I cant move on from this hate that controls this place I cant break free from the visions I see  I?m stuck in a world of pain which I cant seem to shake is there anyone out there how can save me. 
 

Posted on: May 26, 2007, 08:46:34 AMFIGHT BACK


I here the words you say
I don?t believe the lies that you spread the wont get through, 
I will never listen to a word you say
Because behind that face is a world of black and misery,
Cold hearted and no soul you speak these words like it?s the end,
 I?ve heard them before I can?t remember when there stuck in the back of my head for days and days
I stand thinking to my self here we go again the war has begun and this is the end,
 It?s a funny thing that the have money for wars and not the poor
Because if you poor you don?t stand a chance but that?s wrong,
Like a famous quote ?when the rich rage war it the poor who dies?
But I?m making a new quote with five words ?its time to fight back?
You see the leaders today they contradicting there self?s with the words the say
I don?t listen to a word they say; look at the soundings there?s the answers
The death the hate the pain it?s all there look at this life and look at your self?s 
Where do you run when it?s over? The ultimate plan hasn?t even began at the moment all we do is die don?t cry it?s the same for me. 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

*The life of a troubled punk* is special story... long but worth reading... You are wright in your poems that they say dont change world when they are doing it all the time pushing everyone to fight for their interests... claiming its for our good... They are playing gods... using money and believes for stupid wars... when it would be far better for everyone to use all human power to build better future with places to live... support of food... and peace... but they worship destruction and hatred... destroying others work... and breeding hatred by revenge... Someone told me that death is the worst punishment... but from special place I know... ignoring someone and no care about his existence is the worst thing that can be put on soul of guilty... I wonder if there is a chance to stop to listen to foolish leaders... because only fools fallow without own care, sense to God, reason, conscious and free mind... We are before God equal, everyone judged personally... too many people trust that serving someone claiming to be send by God is foolish... So many leaders only talk... when they should prove they are devoted to true God by giving something good in place of hatred and rising wars...

[paulf]

true, true they like to belive that what there doin is right the have a figure in there head that the only way to get rid of poverty and  the poor is to result in war they hide the lies and real reasons on why they go to war with storie which people will belive so thats why people wnd up beliveing them me personaly i think the armed forces are more like slave labour you are made to kill for others who cant see that what there doing is wrong 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

I would be happy to see one day that the way you think is also in other people protecting them from fallowing wrong paths... Some people screams that world goes crazy... when its only choice of each one of us where it goes... at least our wish is our choice... world future is sum of our lives...

[paulf]

Love has been buried
Love is like a fire it can?t be put out
Its meant to last for ever it can?t be forgotten
This world grows colder but my love carries on through
It can?t be lost even through the mist that surrounds
Once its settles you see the life that has become
Loved has faded and died, its turned bark and cold
A world of death has begun   

 I can?t live on, all you do is die
My love has gone and can?t be found
Love has been buried along with our lives?? (With our lives)
I can?t hold on, is anyone out there
Is there anyone out there how can save me from this world

Can we hold on, will tomorrow bring love?
Can?t we see the pain, will it stop or take over
My heart has die turned cold by this war
A War to fight against the poor that I don?t want to be apart of
It?s against everything I believe but still we go ahead and kill our world
And wonder in the end why nothing is left

 But I can?t live on, all you do is die
My love has gone and can?t be found through the mist
Love has been buried along with our lives?? (With our lives)
I can?t hold on is anyone out there???
Is there anyone out there how can save me from this world it?s so cold
And I can?t find my way; all I need is a hero to save me ??
 
In the end it?s the same story it?s all the same all we do is die
It never changes we can?t move on??.
 
I can?t live on, all you do is die
My love has gone and can?t be found
Love has been buried along with our lives?? (With our lives)
I can?t hold on is anyone out there?..
Is there anyone out there how can save me from this world can you save me
All I want is to love 

Posted on: June 07, 2007, 11:02:32 AMEnd it now
Every where you go it?s the same story
Celebrities with bad childhoods and problems
But there not the only ones with these feeling that they share   
So can they see the pain I feel?
Can?t they see what I have seen?
Everyday is one big struggle
Which I choose to Carrie on with
All the needless beating, all these words which brings me down to my knees
I know lot about pain I have lots to share I don?t need your reason to push me on
Can you see me in this big world?
In this big world, can you see, can you see, can you see me??..can you see my agony
It?s a hole in side of me you can see it in my face it?s a dark place but
I need to end this tonight
But the hardest part of this is leaving you all behind
But if I had the guts and the courage I would end it all now then everyone would see
Everyone would see my pain

What you do to me
You look at me you despise everything that I am.
Can?t you leave me be, cause I?m better with out you?
My life has been one big lie I don?t know what to do
I?m not smart but I still choose to write because I need you to see
That I hate everything about me
You choose to speak out loud but I write it all down its easer for me
Don?t judge me that?s just me I can?t help it
You criticize my every need why do continue to bring me down
I hate me self and you make me feel ten times worse
Maybe when it?s all over I will better let?s find out??..
I couldn?t do it I can?t leave you, you hurt me but I can?t leave you behind
What?s wrong with me why do I feel this way? 


Taking an new approach   
I used look at the bad things
I used to write about peace and love but that?s all gone
Now I think of my past and what I have become
The pain I have experienced and felt
I can?t wait till you get what you deserve the day you feel the same way
You brought me down so many times I have lost my way

So I?m taking a new approach I?m starting a new life
A life away from you
A life I can lead with out pain with out the feelings I felt before
A new approach is all I need a life without you???

This all ends tonight my life has begun I will do the things I dream of
The dreams I only see in my sleep my dreams that I keep inside of me
So I choose to step out of the darkness and into the light
A new life with no limits only dreams that can come true

 So I?m taking a new approach I?m starting a new life
A life away from you
A life I can lead with out pain with out the feelings I felt before
A new approach is all I need a life without you???

Things are better now in this new life, I don?t miss you
I moved on and so have you, let?s keep it that way I have a new love
I don?t need you to bring back to that old life, so please just move on just Carrie on
I promise you that I?m ok don?t come back

Because I?m taking a new approach I?m starting a new life
A life away from you
A life I can lead with out pain with out the feelings I felt before
A new approach is all I need a life without you???without you 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Paul...
From your poems and songs we can learn a lot about your life, insight in it and pain you are walking through... Many of us can relate to each one of them... Many of us can learn a lot... and many of us apreciate your open heart for sure ...

[paulf]

cool thanks

Posted on: June 08, 2007, 10:51:28 AMFriend
Friend has come and gone over time, you began to wonder is it worth you time
But in the end you realize that those friends are always there in your heart and soul
You never forget 
There always there in the road of your broken past the past with good times which never seem to last
But your friends are always there that?s something you need to remember where ever they are there always there ??.   

They always there in you past future and present
They might become lost in time but friends are friends
Listen to what they say they will guide you through
The true friends are the ones you can talk to the friend you can return to     
 
They say keep your friends close but your enemies closer but I hate to think my friends are always second
Through high school times were great the best time you will ever have but when it?s over you have to leave them behind   
And that?s the hardest part of this saying goodbye   

They always there in you past future and present
They might become lost in time but friends are friends
Listen to what they say they will guide you through
The true friends are the ones you can talk to but in the end times change and we all have to move on and the hardest part of this is saying those words??..goodbye     

[kelly1st]

easy easy man
how many poems you write in one minute!!!!!!!
all of your poems are cool I really love them all

[paulf]

ha i can write a lot but im takein a break for a while