Topic: new poems!!! (please read!!)

[kelly1st]

well I think you should

[paulf]

ha alows me to think about stuff and let time go by so i have more to write about when i choose to do my next one

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

well I think you should

Hahahaha ... yours (Paul and Yara) convo brings me smile ... thanks 

[kelly1st]

Hahahaha ... yours (Paul and Yara) convo brings me smile ... thanks 

Glad to hear that
but I think he should really takes a break

[paulf]

Live and die
We all live, we all die, that?s a part of life and you can?t ignore it 
But we continue to kill our lives with out a care in the world,
Why do we want to shorten our lives? Why do we want to die only god knows why?
Pain, suffering and deaths all we have left, I don?t think I can hold on
I continue to wonder, can we save our self?s
From the pits of hell where we are at,
We used to have religion to rely on, but that?s changed
Cause people take there lives for gods isn?t that rich
Like they have the right over life and death
But we continue to make this mess. 
We take what people say to heart and end swallowing our pride
We have a history which is repeating its self over and over again.
They shot the man who said ?peace could last forever?
Now we drown in our self pity just trying to hold on with no reason for this life.   

[kelly1st]

GEE that's just awesome man you are so talented
it's really awesome I loved it

[paulf]

cool thanks again

[kelly1st]

No prob

[paulf]

We Felt
I never been the smartest kid on the block
But there?s a fine line between knowing right from wrong
You hurt us that I can?t forgive, we were young that was wrong
I had never seen you fall apart like you did that night,
How scary was it for us to put up with these lies

We feel the pain that you spread 
We have seen the hate
The hate that?s in your eyes and your lies
The hate that takes over in your head it takes over till nothings left   

Times move on but it?s still in my mind
You scared us for life I?m broken inside
Can?t you see what you did to me, its killing me, cant you see?
You toke my insanity you toke my life you couldn?t care about my pride
In the end it?s all the same people like you never change

We feel the pain that you spread 
We have seen the hate
The hate that?s in your eyes and your lies
The hate that takes over in your head it takes over till nothings left   

When the war was over and the smoke fell
It was you lying on the ground finished and done
Now I can move on with my life when you rot in the ground
But now???. 

We feel the happiness
We have seen the light
I have moved on with a new life
I no longer think of you I only think I don?t turn out like you

[kelly1st]

OMG
I really love it so so much

[paulf]

 
Posted on: June 16, 2007, 08:40:23 AMI have been blinded for so long,
I have been lost for so long; it seems I can?t find my way home 
And through the mist all I saw
 Was a dark figure on the other side of the road?
It seems that love has never been my strongest point
So I remember my past and just wonder
 What the future holds because I can?t go on live this way 

Has it all been a lie?
Has it been a ride that I can just get off?
Has it been the best times I will ever see?
But In the end I start to wonder?..

Can I live in this world?
Can I live alone?
Can I Carrie on through the pain and
Should I pick my self up when I?m down?   
Or should I just walk away

I have seen the life?s you lead, 
I saw them in my dreams
We all die swallowing are own pride
Can?t you see what you?re doing?
Can you see the pain and the suffering you create?
Through my eyes that?s all I see
They lives we are leading ??the lives we are killing   

 Has this world had in enough?
Has it seen it all?
Has it been corrupted by the people that it created
But in the end

What should we do?
Should we all start to changes are ways
Should we all live as one?
Or all die alone??.

I have seen the light
I have seen you?re the pride
I have kept on going through the pain
But can you do the same?..
 

[kelly1st]

AWESOME!!!!!!!

but I noticed that most of your poems are sad ones and you told me before that you write them from your own world
I'm just saying that if there's anything bothering you then you just have to tell me
I might not help but be sure that I'll support you 10000000000000000%

[paulf]

yeah thanks for that i keep that in mind but i dont have any thing to say at the moment

[kelly1st]

ok
I just wanted to help
and yeah keep that in your mind

[paulf]

i will dont worrie