Topic: new poems!!! (please read!!) 30th May

[paulf]

I wonder theses empty streets wishing I could just fly away from this place that I call home because I need something new
What the hell can I do make you close to me you can run but you can?t hide I just want to make you feel good inside I need you believe that things will go right. This world keeps dieing but I couldn?t care less it?s not my fault that this world breeds this hate, I try to help but everything end up dead so I just live my life
Jesus of Siberia can you help me out no you cant cause you?re a lie how do we know what you say was true there?s no facts just people who claim they were there but there all dead and this is the end on this life as we know it. people have lead to believe that these things are right, nobody cares nobody listens to me I think I?m going mad with out you, can you hear me today I just need you faith so I can embrace my self the end of this life. But it isn?t over until your underground if I breath I?m still alive.                 

[kelly1st]

AWESOME

but I care,I listen,and im always here if you wanna talk

[paulf]

how i feel
I walk around with my head in the dirt
With no feelings like the love I need to night to help me through the dark times of this life
Can you see in side the darkness of this life and where we will end up? 
Questions with no answers, like when will this world end.
The times when we have nothing but each other but cant see through the mist
That surrounds
I need to remind you that I?m the savour of this life 
I feel the pain you fell I see the hate the destruction that?s all around us today and constantly brings us down 
I?m not invisible I can feel low and down
You could break me only if you knew how
But right now I?m high as the sky and don?t want to come down
Because that when the feelings happen
This goes out to ever poet in this world
Keep writing you will be heard the words that you speak are true and will never be broken
So come with me and pray tonight for a better world and for tonight 
 

[I-am-@ddicted]

^^ these are awesome Paul ... the last one rocked because I write poetry too so I felt apart of it Keep on writing!!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

I wonder theses empty streets wishing I could just fly away from this place that I call home because I need something new
What the hell can I do make you close to me you can run but you can?t hide I just want to make you feel good inside I need you believe that things will go right. This world keeps dieing but I couldn?t care less it?s not my fault that this world breeds this hate, I try to help but everything end up dead so I just live my life
Jesus of Siberia can you help me out no you cant cause you?re a lie how do we know what you say was true there?s no facts just people who claim they were there but there all dead and this is the end on this life as we know it. people have lead to believe that these things are right, nobody cares nobody listens to me I think I?m going mad with out you, can you hear me today I just need you faith so I can embrace my self the end of this life. But it isn?t over until your underground if I breath I?m still alive.                

how i feel
I walk around with my head in the dirt
With no feelings like the love I need to night to help me through the dark times of this life
Can you see in side the darkness of this life and where we will end up? 
Questions with no answers, like when will this world end.
The times when we have nothing but each other but cant see through the mist
That surrounds
I need to remind you that I?m the savour of this life 
I feel the pain you fell I see the hate the destruction that?s all around us today and constantly brings us down 
I?m not invisible I can feel low and down
You could break me only if you knew how
But right now I?m high as the sky and don?t want to come down
Because that when the feelings happen
This goes out to ever poet in this world
Keep writing you will be heard the words that you speak are true and will never be broken
So come with me and pray tonight for a better world and for tonight 

Wow... you are incredibly improving... I am glad to know I will have some kind of successor... if I will have to... uh... nvm... I think with time you will be even better... well I am only one of whole jury you have before ya... but I can say honestly you rock... and you are starting to rock with more invincible power... keep it up... climb this mountain till you reach the top... and even then don't stop... you can even learn to fly if you not give up

[paulf]

thanks rob
Posted on: June 01, 2007, 10:54:56 AMMy life is made up of non fiction and fairy tales
It?s not always real but interesting to read
Like a story we all have a begging and an end
It?s the same for every life cycle in this world
There?s confusion all around no one really knows right from wrong
But its such fun to see that you all have no hope, because of ignores and     
Stubbiness that you have that you continue to hate this life
My writing don?t always rhyme but that doesn?t matter to me because I spread the word of love and peace for all to see
When your writing is as personal as mine you don?t have so worry about the structures of this life just know your surroundings

This is a song
Good over evil
Angels come and take you away to a better place
Where that is you find out when you are done in this place
Its suppose to be white and clean nothing to worry about
But that hard to think about with a world of darkness and hate
We all need to know where we will go so we can change are lives
And Make them show so we are not lead in to the gates of hell 
They say good will prevail over evil but evil has the upper hand
And tearing up apart with his bare hands 
Hope is lost and nothing seems right will that last verse be switched around
 
Hell opens and you see into oblivion the gate which is covered in flames, I don?t want to be here cant you see the good in my eyes. Deep in my soul it?s locked away by these walls, the pain consumes and takes over but goodness is here and will prevail it will prevail
Can?t you see that this was how it was meant to be good over evil not vice reverse
Look into hell and see what has become and see that this is why it was meant to be this way we are the ultimate force of this world we are the force that was meant to be save this life and save all the good in side and not tare it apart

Look in to the plane which holds the fight the planes where we will win it all
Where we will win the war and the lives which are ours we will win at all cost.
The death surround it?s in the air you can smell it, it smells so bad but that?s what comes with war we fought them in the sky?s and the seas and the land beneath our feet
   
 Can?t you see that this was how it was meant to be good over evil not vice reverse
Look into hell and see what has become and see that this is why it was meant to be this way we are the ultimate force of this world we are the force that was meant to be save this life and save all the good in side and not tare it apart

Today?s live we lead have brought us where we are today the pain the suffering the darkness the guilt maybe we can learn from our mistakes and lead the lives we should
Maybe people have seen what has become of our consistence of hate or they need to see again the life of war between good and evil god and the devil god and bad light and darkness in the end the fight never ends and it will happen again only in a matter of time

Hell opens and you see into oblivion the gate which is covered in flames, I don?t want to be here cant you see the good in my eyes. Deep in my soul it?s locked away by these walls, the pain consumes and takes over but goodness is here and will prevail it will prevail
Can?t you see that this was how it was meant to be good over evil not vice reverse
Look into hell and see what has become and see that this is why it was meant to be this way we are the ultimate force of this world we are the force that was meant to be save this life and save all the good in side and not tare it apart

[kelly1st]

I tryed alot to write peoms as good as yours but I defenetly cannot do that, you rock man!!!!

[paulf]

im glad you like them but dont get a head of your self i not that good
well i dont think any way but............. thanks

[kelly1st]

yes you are ,you really are but you maybe cant see yourself as other people do

[paulf]

maybe, probably cause of the mist that surrounds me or maybe cause of what i choose to see and not see but any way thanks again

[kelly1st]

you are so welcome buddy

[paulf]

Total stranger
You seemed nice to start I began to trust you
But I can never forgive you for what you did to me
You tried to break me down
You got in to my head pushed me around 
You?re like my cancer eating away at me
Nothing I say comes out right, nothings good for you
You keep me down and stamp on me, rub me in to the ground
You won?t let me up
You toke my heart my soul my life my wife and everything I needed
 And now I?m back where I started in this dark world
When will you see what you did to me you toke all the good in me
Now I?m left with the anger that I hate you

The world?s cold
The worlds so cold you can see it I?m my eyes
It?s like the pits of the ocean it keeps going on and on
The hate takes over my life turns black I can?t move on
Can you take me away my life?s so cold I can?t move from this seat
I need your love to embrace my needs I need you faith so I know
Why live here why can I see this is what we have to deal with this is the world
I can?t seem to change it


You
I like to think that life moves on your here with me just holding on
We got something that not may people have a love that carries on through all of
This, I love you that?s true the cold world can?t stop me from loving you
I would walk a mile for you I would die for you I know you feel the same
And that?s the best thing about you   


Follow me
I see you I feel you yes I do
Just know that I see everything you go through
As a nation defender of this life 
I see all the bad all the pain that goes on it doesn?t seem to fade
But put your trust in me and I will save this world
I don?t know how but I will make a difference an in the end I will take you to a better place a world of love and peace that?s a promise I will keep its also a life time dream
I will not sleep till I save you     

[kelly1st]

it's really great poem it's really awesome
but I can follow you instead if you want
and I really wanna know from where do you get this talent and this thoughts to write the poems
I really need to know so I can write like you

[paulf]

i would be Honoured to have you follow me an my writing comes within my belifes and what i see in  this world i choose to see the bad because i can make people see what where doin to this world and each other

[kelly1st]

my world is kelly maybe that's why I cant write about anything else