Topic: new poems!!! update (september)

[paulf]

you found me/I'm back

I have found my way
I found my self
It was in some else for far too long
I was lost but now I?m back
I?m counting down the days till I?m saved by you
The day when you come to my door and set me free from this life
That drives me to insanity yes I drives me mad

I was lost but now I?m back
You found me you save me from this life
I was down for far too long but you picked me up
And saved me... 

I walk amongst trees, walk under the stars
Swim in the seas, and fly the skies, walk this land
And becoming lost in time
Were so small but I?m so high
I can?t be brought down
When I?m so high?um so high

I was lost but now I?m back
You found me you save me from this life 
 I was down for far too long but you picked me up
And saved me...

You were my drug you were my ecstasy
You were my life you have been there
Babe can you see that you saved me
Oh yes you saved me
From this life I?m free because of you..... Because of you

I was lost but now I?m back
Because you saved me
From this life you saved me from myself
You picked me up when I was down.
Oh Yes you did,
Now I?m back yes I am I?m free from you
I have been save by the angle that walks be side of me and you.   

[Penguin Lover]

cool poem 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Hey Paul? Its great seeing you back? And welcome? in your new life? I see you are outgrowing over my expectations about you? Its more than great? I am very happy to say that your poem is very powerful? I feel like I lost my own words what to say about it cos your poem still keeps me? speechless? I am very delighted by your masterpiece? You were great poet, but? you are getting greater and greater every time I check your new poems? Keep it up? you know how to make great arts?

[kelly1st]

Awesome poem paul I'm glad that you're back cuz we missed you here
your poem is more than AWESOME

[paulf]

Take what you want you think will last
Cause once you?re gone there?s no coming back
Take what you have gathered from coincidence
Cause you will need it to help you through
When you?re on the dark side of the road
I have seen the light and now I?m back
But you?re where I was time ago 
All you have left is your heart
And long days of pain which you cant quicken up
But its okay cause in time you know that you will be saved
That?s the dream you keep close in side
Because what have you got left a part from hope

How does it feel to been on your own in this great world
Away from home with no direction to where you will go next
Only the darkness and cold, how does it feel?

You have always said you have had my back
But I learned to see that it has never been that way 
You talk behind my back with your new friends
You would rather see me dead in the gutter   
You say I toke your faith but we both know
There was no faith there to begin with.
I?m not that dumb to believe in your lies
So take what you need to live
Like I did when you?re on the streets alone

How does it feel to been on your own in this great world
Away from home with no direction to where you will go next
Only the darkness and cold, how does it feel?

This a story of betrayal and what goes a round comes a round
Because you cant escape your fate
And where you go and who you meet
Cause I have had me time now I have to go and leave you behind       

Posted on: June 23, 2007, 05:49:30 PMhey thanks guys here an other one

Better of dead
I?m gone I have been gone for so long
I have lost my touch
My humanity to live in this world
I?m gone I have been gone for so long
There?s no coming back

I don?t know why you choose to live your lives
Dieing every day with out any peace in sight 
Only pain and loud screams of a loved one in the back of your minds
As you remember those days you sheared 
But it doesn?t matter to me
 Because I?m gone I have left you all behind
You all live on when I?m better off
I have left.

I?m gone I have been saved from a world
That will soon be over; it?s all over for me
But you have to live on through the hate

Don?t feel sad I?m better off because I ended it this way
I don?t feel the lies you said
I don?t feel you 
I don?t feel anything
Confined in a box which holds my body
But my soul is now free from this once locked place
I have broken away from you 

You all mourned sanding around
Wondering how I really felt,
Hating my self but hating you more
Don?t believe this is you fault
I am better off

I never believed in any main religion
It was vague to me
But now I?m in heaven
And it?s not what you think it?s a lot different
From what you read and thought
But I?m okay I?m moving on
I have been save
I?m gone from this life but I?m always here
I now walk beside you as your guardian angel       

[ericb]

You definately have talent,I could only wish for.I hope you take the time to thank God every day for the gift He has given you.You ARE blessed.

[paulf]

Ok I really need to make a change my poems and songs are getting to depressing I need to make some changes so from now on I am going to try and widen my range of vocabulary and topics starting with this one


You always said that we didn?t work
That we would never get along
I guess you were right 
But I?m not afraid to move on
I?m not afraid to walk this world alone
No I?m not.   
We had the best and worst times of our lives
But I?m ready to move on with my life
I don?t need the responsibility on my shoulders
I can?t carry it any more
I need to breakaway, fly away
From this place I call home
I don?t need your love to feel needed
I will always remember our love
Like the flowers and trees
The birds and the bees
It?s not always that good.
But baby I have been saved, I?m free
I woke up this morning not next to you
The best feeling in the world
We don?t need love to keep us high
It?s better of to be single sometimes


Beautiful world 
It?s hard to stay positive with all the bad around
But there?s always light after dark
The smell of the flowers
And the air
The freshness of a clean world.
A world with out pain death or hate
Where the trees and the grass are green
Where you can live in peace
Were you can live free
Foe the rest of your days   
A new beautiful world that has been born,
Light has shone on everyone
A new world a beautiful place
Were we live but for how long
We have been dieing for a long, long time
Its time we had some life
A life for everyone forget the wrong you did
Just come and live in peace for the rest of your days
In this new beautiful world   

[Penguin Lover]

Awesome 

[paulf]

it's ok
It?s ok to love,
It?s ok to move on,
It?s ok to show what you?re feeling inside,
It?s ok to laugh,
It?s ok to smile,
It?s ok to feel this way,
It?s ok to be mad
It?s ok to cry
It?s ok to be sad
Because in the end were all human


I don't know
I don?t know how to feel the slightest emotions
I don?t know how I got this way
I can?t see the love you give
Even on the clearest days
I can?t feel your love
I?m confused inside. 
 I don?t know how I got this way
I don?t feel like I did
I feel like I?m someone else?s
I just want to be me. 
Why I write I don?t have the answer
But some how I can get lost in the words I say
Even if it?s about me or you
It doesn?t matter to me as longs as there?s news
I can preach the word
That we SHOULD ALL be equal 

[ericb]

Poetry is an artform.You've definately mastered it.God Bless dude.

[paulf]

These are the stories of good and evil
Everything is not what it seems
As you will see
Good doesn?t all ways prevail
So these are the real stories of the war between god and evil   

Creatures of the night    
My days are dawning
There coming to an end
The long nights a wait
With endless darkness
The times when all the bad comes out to play,
With out a care, they play through the night
They don?t have to worry about anything
Because once the light comes back they will be gone.

Creatures of the night
They play they have there fun
But through these times no one gets to see them
Because you are Asleep at night
Unaware of the evil which leagues? outside your window
That?s why there called the creatures of the night

Would you run?
Would you hide?
Would you stand up and fight
The evil which continues to rise
It never dies
Would you be the saviour of the night?
The saviour of this life

Creatures of the night
They play they have there fun
At night is where you see them
Tonight?s the night
That you fight

You fought them in the skies
You fought them in the seas
You fought then on this land 
You fought them everywhere possible
In the end the good always prevails
That?s just life get used to it

They had there fun
They played there games
But it wasn?t enough to stop the saviour
From claiming what was ours
And stopping the creatures of the night   
 
 

[ericb]

         I LOVEwriting about good vs.evil,because good ALWAYS prevails,even if it doesn't happen in the way that we want and at the time we expect.God watches out for each and everyone of us,even though we can sometimes doubt this.God almost never does things the way we would like or even expect.But His way is ALWAYS better than anything we can concieve.Good,in the end,ALWAYS prevails,because God  is stronger than ANYTHING.God Bless Paul.

[paulf]

Can?t you see the pain?
It?s building up and surrounding this place.
It?s settling around just like the snow,
It leaves its mark in our souls
Were are scared for life it never goes
The long days on your own
With only your prays.

You pray to the gods to help you through   
Because it?s so hard on your own
Abanded by your parents
No love to spear 
Where you go next you do not know
You were a special child which wasn?t loved
You never knew why you couldn?t  fit in

Posted on: July 09, 2007, 02:09:27 PMThrough out the entire world?.
You can here the cries of man,
All the way from New Orleans to Jerusalem,
You can hear them in the night,
Crying out like the wild beasts
Hurting and dieing in there souls
Just looking for some peace,
Through out this broken world
Were terrorism and war are real
The life?s we had are slowly dieing
Your souls tattered and faded
Our love has shone
Our peace out of the window
And all hope gone,
Hatred and pain has risen
Taking over killing us all
The rivers of blood
Flow through out theses lands
Death and destruction is all I see
On every page of the news papers,
It?s the same old stories
You hear them every where you go
That we are doomed
That we have no hope
That tomorrow holds no fait
We don?t know what it holds   
But if we could love
Wouldn?t it be great?
Living as one 
Living in a world of peace and love
Wouldn?t it be great??...?

[ericb]

To answer the last question:Yes it would be great.you're writing IS grreat.God Bless.

[behindthesehazeleyes05]

those are great poems.. really touched me.. good job and god bless you paul.. your a great writer