Topic: new poems!!! update (september)

[herdarkerside]

your awesome...

[paulf]

 

[ericb]

Yes dude,you are awesome.God Bless.

[paulf]

would you

If I was to fall
Would you pick me up?
Or leave me on the ground to die
Would you dedicate your days to me?
If I was last thing in your memories
Would you forget me?
If I was leave this place
Can you save me...?
From this broken world
Would you love me?
If I was to show you that I loved you
Would you die for me?
And save me from harm
Would you lie to protect me?
From this dark world
Would you lye here and just hold me
As we glaze at the stars
Would you believe in me?
Would you still be my friend to the end??.
When we are all done.
 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Paul...

Lately to all my friends I want to say... Hold strong... I dont understand it clearly... but... it seems leaking out from bottom of my soul... You are amazing writer... You express all your thougths and emotions... I think I lost such ability somewhere in mnoment when I felt emptiness in me for first time... I think I call it by myself to reduce pain... and protect everyone I know... I can do a lot in my life... but also too much... and against rational thinking... I hope and I believe you are in better situation... Your poems are telling me alot... Your life... your low days... and moments when you rise again stronger than before... I have faith that your poems can help others to make them strong as you are... Sharing experience and knowledge is important... Like parents and teachers are in duty to make us ready and suitable to live in complicated world and deal with mistakes and challenges... Every your poem holds meaning and a lot other values in it... I have my faith in you like in other poets here and outside... Your path is not written in words... Not yet... Cos you can fill it by them... And every one word changed into action is worth sky, land and ocean your big heart can behold... Keep inspirated Paul... as world is long and wide...

[paulf]

I?m lost inside
Not sure where I should go
Not sure what I should do
Everyday I?m confused
But I have you
To read and hear my pain
I needed for you to know how I felt
Because I think I?m going mad

Where should I go?
What should do?
Because I hate being so confused in this world?..
I hate every little thing that makes me feel this way
I hate feeling like I have nothing left to do???.
 
I?m making the wrong decisions 
And picking the wrong paths
Everyday the hate gets worse
Not much left to live for
But I guess that would be the easy way out
That?s why I get so confused
Because I don?t know what I should do
I so confused??so confused

I hear what you say I try to take it in
But is seems to go away??..
I think I need help
Because I?m running out of time
Can you understand my pain???

Where should I go?
What should do?
Because I hate being so confused in this world?..
I hate every little thing that makes me feel this way
I hate feeling like I have nothing left to do???.
What should I do???..
Where should I go??..
I hate being alone in this world?? in this world

[kelly1st]

God paul!!!!!
you made me really speechless your poems are awesome and I'm gonna ask you again,How many poems you write in one minute

and I'm gonna say one more thing to you paul,
You made me feel a bit useless cuz when we compare you poems to mine.....God I'm so workless.

anyway I love your work,Keep it up man

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

I?m lost inside
Not sure where I should go
Not sure what I should do
Everyday I?m confused
But I have you
To read and hear my pain
I needed for you to know how I felt
Because I think I?m going mad

Where should I go?
What should do?
Because I hate being so confused in this world?..
I hate every little thing that makes me feel this way
I hate feeling like I have nothing left to do???.
 
I?m making the wrong decisions 
And picking the wrong paths
Everyday the hate gets worse
Not much left to live for
But I guess that would be the easy way out
That?s why I get so confused
Because I don?t know what I should do
I so confused??so confused

I hear what you say I try to take it in
But is seems to go away??..
I think I need help
Because I?m running out of time
Can you understand my pain???

Where should I go?
What should do?
Because I hate being so confused in this world?..
I hate every little thing that makes me feel this way
I hate feeling like I have nothing left to do???.
What should I do???..
Where should I go??..
I hate being alone in this world?? in this world

I hope you are choosing well Paul... You deserved good life... and you have strength to work it out... I must believe you know that your life fully depends on you... there is not much help you can take from others... there is not much under your control... and responsibility mostly only grow wit you... I don't know what paths you are walking... how much you are safe... what are your all troubles... who you deal with... Most of the time you must rely only on yourself... And you have to believe in your own value... Everyone of us has it place in this world... Some of us have easier start... but... maybe less satisfaction or need for bigger goals in their life... Some of us are walking paths of suffer... looking for treassure sometimes even not define... Some of us are lost... Some - knows where to go... but... every life has its purpose, meaning, effect, change, character... its spell... complicated like long book... where pages of past are written in stone... and pages of future are written by shade... And its writer is its hero... deciding from what he have... We are all artists Paul... It only depends of what kind... and how much specialised... I hope you are doing well... learning and fulfilling your spell of life... My wish is *Closer to heart... to keep it good art... Farer from hatred... to keep value best rated... More about God love inside... to have light spread so wide... Less about dark... to make temptation fallen apart... Only few mistakes... to learn how it breaks... Manny success... to show you are one of True God followers*...

Uh... I post it with so large delay... I think I had the same troubles as you... but... Hatred can be stoped... or crashed... depends on what was the reason... I think... I won... still losing much... but... at least not losng everything... Keep strong Paul... Its your life...

[paulf]

You were always there
What can I say?
How was I meant to know?
You would be the one to let me down,
How was I meant to know???
How was I meant to know?

I guess it?s over
You picked up your things and walked out the door
And left town
Leaving me all alone
To start over
With my broken dreams and heart? (x2)

Now I turn around
Back where I used to be
Thinking where did I go wrong
Was I to blame some how?
I was so confused 

I guess it?s over
You picked up your things and walked out the door
And left town,
Leaving me all alone?.. leaving me alone
To start over
With my broken dreams?
To start over with a broken heart??..

I never saw it coming
You took me by surprise
I was blinded by love
But now it?s over
You left and I was forced to move on

Its over
You picked up your things and walked out the door
And left town
Leaving me all alone
To start over
With my broken dreams and heart? (x2)

I hope you?re happy
I hope you are loved
I hope you never forget
What you did to me 

I guess it?s over
You picked up your things and walked out the door
And left town
Leaving me all alone
To start over
With my broken dreams and heart?
But I ill never forget you??.forget you???forget you
Because you remind me I deserve more?

Posted on: August 26, 2007, 11:34:08 AMshow some love
I?m sitting here by myself,
Just trying to find out where the time went, 
Reflecting on where I?m going now
Think Should I continue to follow my wildest dreams
Or leave it all behind??..

But I think of this world
And the people that fill it up
Reflecting on my life,
And thinking what I have and
Telling my self that everybody needs love,
Everyone needs love to feel safe
To feel they have someone
To feel like they wont be let down
Everyone needs some love to light up the shadows of there face?.

Maybe I forgot
But now know
You put in what you got
And people get what they deserve? (They get what they deserve)
Because you do what you can
That?s all they ask
But I still think these thoughts

Everyone needs some love
They need to feel safe
We could live as one
Side by side, side by side
But we have to live by rules
Why could we be free?
And be loved
Why do we live in this disappointment?
When we could all be loved?.
So I sing to you?..
To show some love?..
Hoping you show some back
 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Paul... your song/poem *Show some love* is a proof of your heart perfection... I am giving you my deep node... When I said you can be my great succesor... I didnt expect you were and will be so much more better... Your creation goes much further in light than mine... You have a lot of care... When I can look for black traces in me... Your soul seems so free... Clear crystal that faith can melt into monument of angel... Be this way... Fallow this path... Poems and what they contain means good and light brighter than day... I am sending my wish and pray that you will be rewarded for every wise sentence they say...
I left special comment for song/poem that you left just above *Show some love*... I feel like I jsut came back from such trip for love... I feel lost... so much things I dont know... So much is under control of others... I screem for answers... but... I have only reply from silence... Losing conection with someone special can tear heart and soul... to let it go far away... or let it get shattered into pieces... Your song sounds so familiar... It cross my own... Maybe i should try the same... to burn my words... if not into poem... then... into... letter... but... where it will go???... So many poems just dry somewhere never opened... so many burns from inside pain... So many... blank... unfinished... just stay... I can free myself from this net... till miracle... will save me... Dear Paul... live well... protect others life... share the given world... its our... only one...

[paulf]

I sit hear thinking to my self, Am I going to make it? Or just fall from grace?.
Because this war will never end ??.
Guns, bombs, and destruction is all we see,
Poverty and war is all that is left of this once wonderful world
We try to change but it will never work we are to low down to pick our self?s up
One war ends and another begins it?s only a matter of time before this world brakes down and nothing is left
Soldiers died for what a war which was wrong a war for no purpose except for money and oil, now a mass terror has begun people living in fear afraid to stand up for there right, People living with lost ones which weren?t part of this fight
A fight could have been avoided 

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Dear Paul... Truth about me is that my spirit belong... or belonged... to war... but my promiss is to keep myself on good side and rise sword only for righteous purpose... Its not so easy to recognise true enemy... or who deserved to die... Evil means mostly cowardice... and habit to hide... sometimes someone you are fighting with is just a fool fallowing someone other command... Ain't it irony when brothers can kill each other when someone is putting them into deadly feud?... Maybe its truth that these days in this world is not much innocence, true faith, hope and pure values... but it don't mean we must surrender... and join them in foolish walk into redemption forgetfulness... I chose to stand on death souls heap of my enemies and stay invincible in fire that can burn them for eternity... I will not rise my sword to taint it if I don't feel its needed... Maybe I am blessed to live in peace... but if war will visit my life... I will mark area of my hands to show where I can give my soul protection... I will do a lot of sacrifices not to turn myself into what some of them are becoming... I do not fallow hatred control... I do not fallow anyone control without my own care... I do not enter wars I do not support or I cant change... I am even against protection from atomic rocketry... Its not a shield... True shield is to disarm hands and live in peace... Something able only for people that can leave close to each other... that can pass as by... that can trade or leave others in peace... Vultures and hyenas are feeding on carcass of war machine... by trading guns... by providing payed protection... by exchanging resources for protection... There is not much we can do... We can only stay against... denying to give any hand to this... My word... my pray... my spell of life I can give only to builders, creators, protectors, leaders, true faith follower's, innocent, angels and anyone I can not name by words, but I can mark by my soul acceptance... World is complicated... life too... Rules are for us to learn... We are... to live by rules... and choose... comprehend... and to reach what is our souls aim... against temptation... and mistake made by taking something too easy... Like... when we accept to enter war... there is no turn back... we can only choose diffrent end... and pray for mercy... before its too late... because... some path once taken... lives in past... and affect future... forever...