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  • kelzduckadork66

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open door(new poem by me!)
« on: July 21, 2007, 10:08:57 PM »
Looking for an Open Door
She?s looking for something more,
Searching for an open door.
Waiting for a friend to come along,
And sing back her heart?s song.

Trying to find an easy way out
Wanting to know what it?s all about.
Why she fakes a smile
And forces up a laugh.
No one will know,
She?ll never let he true sadness show.

She puts on her favorite song,
Drowns out the noise that surrounds.
She doesn?t want any Sunday school answers.
She wants the truth.
Say it right to her face
She?ll handle what she can take.

How can her entire world turn upside down?
Sick of feeling so left out.
Looking for a hand to hold
To have that special touch of gold.

She?s looking for something more,
Searching for an open door,
Waiting for a friend to come along,
And sing back her heart?s song.

^^let me know what you think!and check out myother poem "never forgive,never forget"

thanks guys!


  • paulf

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #1 on: July 22, 2007, 08:22:05 AM »
i loved it i have been lookin for an open door for so long........
great job good work!!!!!  ;) ;)

Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #2 on: July 22, 2007, 04:22:36 PM »
God Bless.Always. :D :D :D :D :D :D

"Arise Snailguin! Arise!"

  • kelzduckadork66

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #3 on: July 22, 2007, 09:12:03 PM »
keepit comin guys!im ready for it!

Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #4 on: July 23, 2007, 01:29:05 PM »
Awesome abbs! ...... you're way better than me  :D
Stranger I know so well
You got me tripping over myself
Can't trust in you...
Cause as I reach for your hand
I still sink into quicksand
Isn't my good side worth rescuing?

Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #5 on: July 23, 2007, 03:51:59 PM »
Dear Abbs :smiley48:... I must admit I cant stop this weird feeling saying and repeating this one word all the time after reading your poem ::).... - *lovely* ;D... I see clearly that Kelly is your inspiration :smiley6:... and I see it in really good way :D... Its like you add beauty petal to flower of Kelly songs :smiley22:... your poem has everything it needs :D... It means its perfect art... Thank you for chance to read it :smiley15: :smiley6:...

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

  • Michelle

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #6 on: July 24, 2007, 10:40:31 PM »
Hey Abbey,Great Job!
Love It! ;D

  • kelzduckadork66

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2007, 07:17:05 PM »
thanks peeps!

Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #8 on: September 10, 2007, 12:41:17 PM »
Awesome!!!! really great,I love it!! :) ;) :D ;D

  • kelzduckadork66

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #9 on: September 10, 2007, 07:43:34 PM »
thanks!

Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #10 on: September 11, 2007, 04:43:48 AM »
looking forward for more ;D

  • mandie

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #11 on: September 12, 2007, 09:10:18 AM »
continue to compose more poems...
i'll try to put notes on it via piano...
i love this poem...

Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #12 on: September 12, 2007, 11:32:18 AM »
continue to compose more poems...
i'll try to put notes on it via piano...
i love this poem...

Hey that will be awesome!!

  • kelzduckadork66

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #13 on: September 12, 2007, 08:02:48 PM »
continue to compose more poems...
i'll try to put notes on it via piano...
i love this poem...

oh that would be so awesome!oh wow!im so excited!you have no clue!

thanks tons!

  • mandie

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Re: open door(new poem by me!)
« Reply #14 on: September 13, 2007, 10:08:14 AM »
aha..
i'm working on it...
pretty hard but i'm trying to make it as original as it can be..
ah yea...
i'm excited too..
i've composed songs before..
but me myself didn't like it..
haha..
but im really not good with words..
haha, i'll just do the notes thing..  :D

i've got the melody, im just workong on the notes..
good luck to me..

 

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