Topic: MY POEMS

[iwuvsmesumkellbell]

robert i  dont really understand whut u r saying???

lol.

[Greek]

very few people get what he says. lol

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

robert i  dont really understand whut u r saying???

lol.

Geeee... girl.. use ya head  ... You use many marks like ** and *!!!* so I can treat such expression as like you are *screaming* your poem lol... uh uh... I just always dig to the second and futher meaning of everything... unfortunately I do something similar when talking to someone... Its like I can tell some girl *I love you* and she will not even notice it... haha... Its dorky thing... nvm... just don't worry and have fun...  ... phew... chicks  ... but I luv ya all   

[Thera]

amazing beautiful powerful poems Krista, very well written, please write on

robert i  dont really understand whut u r saying???

lol.

very few people get what he says. lol

i understand what he says, so i guess i'm one of those very few people

[mandie]

sooo cool!

these are awesome poems i swear!

[Thera]

^ hey Mandie/Lora/Amanda or whatever, haha when are you going to update your fanfic? i'm wondering what's going to happen between Kelly and Thera (lol, it's weird to hear my own name in a story )

[Greek]

amazing beautiful powerful poems Krista, very well written, please write on

i understand what he says, so i guess i'm one of those very few people

ha ha, yes you are!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Yes... she is  ... but still... sometimes even she don't know... what its all about 

[iwuvsmesumkellbell]

my poems r mostly about friendships that i have lost in so little time.

i really miss them and i hope they will soon come back to me.
but i kno they never will.

thanx soooo much!!
my kv family is so AWESOME!!

ily!

xoxox
Posted on: December 15, 2007, 04:16:28 PMi guess u can say robert i really express myself through my poems.

its really hard on me right now.
Posted on: December 15, 2007, 04:19:58 PMheres some more.
(this for hoping to finally meet my best friend and hoping to go to the Kelly and Reba concert)

enjoy!! lol

all i want is this very moment.
to finally see you, meet you, and be friends forever with you.
all i asked was if i can go.
and all you did was yell.
you know i want this really bad.
and it may never happen in a lifetime.
this is my biggest dream.
i just want you to understand.
please just let me have this one day, one night.
i wont ask for nothing more.
i just really want to have this chance and to make it happen.
 

this is a song i wrote. hope u like it.
called: BLACK HOLE
there's a black hole

i see nothing
but i see this bright light in the sky
lord is that you
can you help me
pick me up off my feet
what have i done
why has this gone all wrong
why has everything left me behind, but you
black hole, black hole, black hole

lord what can i do
i just want to go back
relive all those good times and forget the bad
i want to get it together
where has it all gone to
all i think about is the past and not my future
i can look ahead but not left or right

there's a black hole
i see nothing
but i see this bright light in the sky
lord is that you
can you help me
pick me up off the ground
what have i done
why has this gone all wrong
why has everything left me behind, but you
black hole, black hole, black hole

where are you taking me
why can't i get it right
this is the best day of my life
all i see is the positive and no negative
i don't want it to go away
can i stay in this forever
i'm glad you saved my LIFE


XOXOXOXXOXO

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Ehh... I like the first one... original like you ... Well... few sentences looks like borrowed ... hehe... but the whole lyrics content outstands ... in very good expensive way ... and its about dream we all seems to have... well in main part the same ... but in the end individual for each one of us ... omg... I *blach blach* again ... Oh... Did I say *eh* and *oh*? haha ... Anyway... *Black hole* have chance for more fans ... and is like beauty contribution to Kelly songs and her positive attitude ... Yup... aaaaaaaaaaand... I think if someone is enlightened by light from sky... such someone must be blessed ... Don't you think so?... Even if we are talking only about such feeling ... because... I don't remember if God is so easy that He uses only simple light in His... well... presence... Yeah... God bless you...

[iwuvsmesumkellbell]

no none of the poem before the song was borrowed. lol
i wrote it myself. i was in a down mood when i wrote it. i was really sad and in a bad mood.
i just sat in my room and wrote it. all by myself. sitting there thinking and listening to whut i listen to best. haha
but no none sentences borrowed.

yeah i think so. i see whut u r saying.

well thanx for the comment.

i see evrything u r saying.

xoxoxoxoxxo

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

no none of the poem before the song was borrowed. lol
i wrote it myself. i was in a down mood when i wrote it. i was really sad and in a bad mood.
i just sat in my room and wrote it. all by myself. sitting there thinking and listening to whut i listen to best. haha
but no none sentences borrowed.

yeah i think so. i see whut u r saying.

well thanx for the comment.

i see evrything u r saying.

xoxoxoxoxxo

Eh gurl... Sorry for my words saying it looks like borrowed... I tried to point the source of inspiration... Two maybe three sentences reminds me part of Kelly song... and I guess I meassure people by my size too often... I mean... I catch myself on using others sentences... or I see to much similarity in those I use and those I heard... My memory is sometimes stronger than inspiration so the effect... can be like slight deja vu... The same situation can occur when we read lyrics about the same subject... but written absolutely by use of diffrent vocabulary... because the message is the same... I think I am just wasting my strength on explaining myself... I am dork... hehe... Anyway... I am sorry for your loss as for your kellyville family members... Don't ask how many people I remember... but... I didn't talk to for looong time... and... as you said... I guess I never will... eh... one even badly broke my heart... but it so messed... that even thinking of it brings pain... yeah... Lets say... if you need family... you can count on me... well... as far as I can be around... You know... we both have lives that makes it not too easy... and... do you really think you will not see those dorks ever again?... Miracles happens... like Kelly

P.S.
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