Topic: Broken Dreams by Beth Clarkson

[hazel681]

awww im sorry beth. but your work was beautiful and it came straight from your heart. that makes it more than just words, but sharing the feeling with us is truly an honor. keep writing hun.

[KrzyMuzikGrl]

its okay. People wanted nothing more than to hurt my friend. They hurt us both. Thats one thing i don't tolerate: you can break my heart, fine. But when you hurt my true friends...thats a totally different story. Part of me hopes they read this and know "i know it was you. I know you lied to me when i asked if you knew about it. I know you tried to hurt us both. You didn't stop me, and you didn't stop my friend. We both lived on. Separately...but it didn't matter. We lived on. You didn't and never can bring either one of us down."

[hazel681]

^you are amazing  your situation makes mystic poems, keep using your feelings and make different poems about them, they are so awesome. its great that you dont live in fantasy when something like that happens to a person if that makes sense you know who you are. and i like that.

[dutchgirlfan]

I totally Agree Hazel

I think the most personal poems are the scariest ones but the best ones. Write on!

[KrzyMuzikGrl]

Haha. Thanks y'all!

yes, that is very true about me. I know who I am. I am EXTREMELY independent. I am stubborn. I have career goals (yes, at 17).Which can be a huge downfall in the dating world. I usually don't have a lot of time to go and spend time with someone. My last bf couldn't understand that. Haha. I'm thinking. "i need a man who will give me independence. Who won't Try to control every aspect of me. And won't try guilt trips when i say " i can't. I'm busy."
cuz to me, a needy man is SO unattractive. Lol.

[hazel681]

yeah i agree bianca the scariest or most emotional are the best cuz you dont have to try so hard, its to honest to try and choose words carefully or change it. thats really good beth, i agree to you too, needy guys are unattractive. haha im independent too so i get what you are sayin girl.

[KrzyMuzikGrl]

Haha!! Yay! i'm not alone.
I like my freedom.

I think that's why I like Kelly's music a lot. Since U Been Gone, Because of You (especially Because of You), Beautiful Disaster, Never Again, Hole, Yeah, Be Still, Irvine, are all songs I have Identified with. A lot a lot. Haha. lol. Well, really all of them. Which sounds so cliche, but whatever its true.

I'm just me. No more, no less. I won't pretend to be someone I'm not to make you happy with me. Sorry. If you don't like me...i don't care. Thats just my opinion. Haha.

[hazel681]

^duuuudee you are like my twin!! haha i am the exact same way!!! wowz

[KrzyMuzikGrl]

wowz is true. You must be like Kelly, huh?

[hazel681]

yeahhh fo sho!

[KrzyMuzikGrl]

Haha. kewl