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Conflicting contraditories, enough
« on: March 06, 2008, 05:24:04 PM »
I feel there is more but i can't write taht down yet.... this is what i've got so far....feel free to give your honest opinion

Conflicting contraditories

Torn apart in pieces
Intwined in the good and the bad
Where tears are falling down
The sun is already shining in my head

Being screwed by happiness
Crying because i
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


  • Fiona682

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Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2008, 10:10:40 PM »
I like the 1st one even though i dont get it, its like a...whats the word? Compare and contrasting everything. I DONT like the 2nd one because it rhyms to much, although that is a form of poetry and some people like that. its just a matter of taste i suspose.

Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough and 3 NEW poems...
« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2008, 11:51:47 AM »
Thanks for your honesty girl! :D The first one is about contradictories, I feel i'm like black and white, yin and yang, left and right. It doesn't make sense if you get what I mean.... check the title of the poem; that one doesn't make sense too....

haha it's funny that you say you don't like the 2nd cauz it rhymes too much bt I can tell you it has the same rhyme as the first one :P

I made some other poems....i don't think these are my best but Like I said; I felt there was more, it had to come out although it isn't really really well. I hope I get honest reactions again ;D


Can you tell me who I am?

When you look me in the eyes
Can you tell me what you see?
Can you answer the question;
Who the hell is she?

How do you see me?
You see happiness or mysery?
Or maybe something in between.
Please tell me, what do I mean?

Can you take a close look?
And read my deepest thought.
Can you give me your faith?
And the love which you brought?


My dream to sing

In my world we sing a song
Everybody can sing along

Everyone will dance and sing
And use this as his cellphone ring

This song, about you and me
Will set this whole wide world for you free

Don
« Last Edit: March 07, 2008, 05:21:59 PM by dutchgirlfan »
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2008, 05:25:48 PM »
Uh.. you are magician :smiley45:... It looks like you can turn everything into beauty poems and do it like a fairy just on hand demand:P... From sad smile to happy kiss ;)... I think *Conflicting contraditiores (contradictions)* is the best... I guess its the best description of what is so unusual and remarkable in you... Beauty of contradictions :)... I wonder what you can tell me if I name your dark side a perfect blend for all that is bright in you ;D... The way you are make you shine... outstand from crowd... do something more... point where others dont mind... I think you see things better... you dont cut off good from bad like the second dont exist... You just know they go along... and you have better chance to pick up real good :smiley22:... Ok ok... Lets move forward ;)... *Enough* deserves a prize ;D... I think its the one of the strongest poems I ever had chance to read :)... It really screams from the board :smiley15:... Like shouting spell... its silent only when I dont read it ;)... but after I read it I hear echo like few minutes longer :smiley45:... maybe more :smiley24:... I hope as the way its honest... its force will turn back... and make your relationship better... I mean with the person its aimed at... Cos I think... uhm... The problem is in real honest talk and understanding each other... but... I guess I can only imagine what is really behind your poem... So... I must end just on wishing that you will win good... answers... honesty... and I guess love too :smiley6:... *Can you tell me who I am?* is very very deep  :D... and believe me... makes speechless :-X, embarrassed :smiley6:... and makes me feel really dorky :P... It cause many thoughts :)... Yeah... but one think I can tell ya ;D... You are lovely mystery... with great personality... deep heart... and you are one of the greatest artists... that can paint sky by emotions like by colourful clouds and stars :smiley6:... *My dream to sing* is definitely a song :smiley15:... perfect to sing by everyone :D... I guess it can go along with claps of hands... hmmm... I think you are just turning world into one :D... by simple wise words *Everybody can sing along :)... *To her who may not read* is the best prove you are fairy by what you are doing with words and your emotions... Your desk is a holy place :smiley15:... You have soul of an angel underneath :smiley6:...

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #4 on: March 07, 2008, 05:45:01 PM »
whoow you really mean all this what you are saying? :o Whoo I am really speechless you know... and you know; you do understand the poem *enough* :D its about someone who has been a really good friend for 11 years but she is letting me down and she has something against me which she denies or doesn't want to explain...I am really bitter and was when I wrote that one and I see that I made that clear.

haha and yes i'm really... well... I call it weird and strange and full of contradictions which is pretty exhausting most of the time; but i'm glad you like it :D

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The way you are make you shine... outstand from crowd... do something more... point where others dont mind... I think you see things better...


seriously I feel really flattered that you think about me like that :) ::)

and You know? I always felt, and still do, that my sis is a better writer of poems...i was the one who allways wrote stories. Untill I couldn't get all my thoughts and feelings out and I also tried poems... maybe they aren't all good but i'm glad you like them and I'm glad I have the feeling it helps me to get away from myself when I need that.
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


  • iwuvsmesumkellbell

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Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #5 on: March 08, 2008, 12:24:35 PM »
those r really good!

i really like them all.

and yes sum of them are the same postion and they relate in the same ways!


xoxox

Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #6 on: March 08, 2008, 12:27:30 PM »
thank you krista :D
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


  • iwuvsmesumkellbell

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Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #7 on: March 08, 2008, 12:30:25 PM »
your sooo welcom B!


anything for yah hun!  :D


xoxox

Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #8 on: March 08, 2008, 12:33:08 PM »
if you have advice or you don't like it don't be afraid to post that too ;) :)
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


  • iwuvsmesumkellbell

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Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #9 on: March 08, 2008, 12:35:22 PM »
ok. will do.



im here for anytime. u can talk to me about anything.

xoxox

Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #10 on: March 08, 2008, 12:37:14 PM »
thank you hat means a lot to me :)
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


  • iwuvsmesumkellbell

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Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #11 on: March 08, 2008, 12:41:34 PM »
im glad to know that i can help u in any way!

love u girlie!


xoxox

Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #12 on: March 08, 2008, 12:48:08 PM »
thank you, that makes me happy :D :D :D
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


  • iwuvsmesumkellbell

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Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #13 on: March 08, 2008, 12:50:07 PM »
lol.


well talking to all of these helping people always puts a smile on my face.


xoxox

Re: Conflicting contraditories, enough
« Reply #14 on: March 08, 2008, 12:53:02 PM »
same here!! ;D

well and it helps to write it all out....seriously the last 2 days were soo crazy...i kept writing and writing serioulsly... like 5 to 7 peoems if i'm right?
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


 

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