Topic: My poems

[Stinky]

The closest I got to touching you
was drawing your pretty picture.
Caressing your face with pencil
and my gentle fingertips.

Forming my love across your face,
holding your curves in my eyes.
The tender shape of your nose,
the caress of your lips.

But the lines were drawn in pain
And drenched in my precious blood.
All I longed to shed there
In a point of dulling edge.

The sides of my hands are covered
In the life you promised me.
Weather or not you saw it
It played nothing, as we were not meant to be.

[iwuvsmesumkellbell]

thats really good bo!

i really like it.. it really shows ur feelings and emotions in it..

keep up the awesum work!! 


~*~krista loves laura~*~

[hazel681]

WHOA! THATS AWESOME! you are very deep, i like it. please post more!

[Fiona682]

i concure very good, i like the last stanza the best.

[dutchgirlfan]

like Hazel said! You are very deep! You use images which I always love to do too! Really well! And you said you're not that good?

[Stinky]

Oh wow guys, thank you, blush.

[hazel681]

please keep writing dont hold back you have such a talent!

[Stinky]

My loving faith in you.

For a life spent before the sun,
An ache does wake deeper than blood would run.
A feather has been given,
A folded heart in seconds begun.

The sun over the mountain,
spills it's light through your window pane.
My heart is your for taking now my Angel,
do not hold me in sustain.

So proud to be known as your forever
from here until where ever
Fall in to my arms, sweet baby
I will hold you safe, as long as we're together
Posted on: April 23, 2008, 07:10:27 AMWords unfold.

Esesnce in gold
Time to hollow to hold
Aching is awoken by lips
Touched by a rose and clipped

Wings forced to ground
The bird cold on beating drummed sound

[vanilla]

there awesome !!!! pure emotion !!!

[I-am-@ddicted]

Love them, thats all I have to say .. your very talented and great with words and how to arrange them so their more then just poems, they are extremely creative

[dutchgirlfan]

what a words...oh my god.

[Stinky]

Thanks guys....wow, you made my day 

[kelzduckadork66]

good job!
keep posting more!

[Fiona682]

i love the 1st one *my loving faith in you* is fantastic, the others good to but im a loveaholic so i like that one better

[Stinky]

Thank you, I like that one too. I can't wait for someone to fall in love with me like that.