Topic: My poems

[uniqueandalanis4]

thank's i can write a deep one but im scared too !!i lost my first love at the age of twenty and its been 8 yr's sence she passed away and still i cry everyday!!the pain will never go away,the tear's will never go away..and i think to myself i wish i could talk to her today
i wish i would have known that was gonna be the end
so many regret's but she's always in my dream's!even though there jus dream's i believe in them!she might not come to ur dream for a while because she dont want anyone to cry..but she's right by urside! hugging you and smiling down.!

[Greek]

thank you umah

[ummm]

Your welcome Laura and April mate I'm sorry for your loss. It hurts like nothing anyone can ever know. Your poem was stunning, like my Bo.

Your friend Umah

[hazel681]

ooh april thats beautiful. better than mine.
I didnt even know bo but i know she was a wonderful person

[uniqueandalanis4]

i did 'nt know her all like that i wish i did she wrote comments in my thread's and and i would read her writting and it is beautiful!!i might have not of known her but my heart go's out to her family and friends
and to her too( stinky your an awesome WRITTER! !!!!!

and thanks hazel about  what i wrote i wanted to write deeper but i think what i wrote is fine for now!!

peace ,love,happyness..
april ann*
god bless you all..x

[ummm]

omg....these last two......when did she wrote that....What you said about almost like she knew what would happen..i know what you mean when I read the first thing, her thoughts...  and the poem Warm almost sounds like a goodbye........

I'm not sure when she wrote them, must be recently because I have not seen them yet, until I went on to her lap top. They are beautiful, I know what warm is about, just by a conversation we had. The others just seem like....she knew?? I don't know, maybe so.

[dutchgirlfan]

she had more on her laptop?

[ummm]

Breathe, let it go
Dream, let the river in your mind flow
to sunny banks to bathe
Your beautiful aching skin.

Somehow it does seem to fit you,
a secret pain held within.
I have tried to see
help you in your tears
But for me it seems
You let go of my hand

I'd give anything I own,
not that without you I own much,
to dance with you again.
To pull your body close
and move with you on a shining floor.

I hope your listening
to every stunning tears.
All I have is a sorry
lonely but heartfelt words.

Good night my darling sweetheart
visit my dreams tonight.
Keep marching smiling
enjoy the rest of your life.

[dutchgirlfan]

you wrote this yourself or is it bo's?

its so sad... :'(

[hazel681]

wow whoever wrote that- bo or umah- its beyond words worthy of its praise. i love it!

[kelzduckadork66]

wow thats amazing!!!!
which ever one of you wrote that amazing work!

[ummm]

I wrote it 

thanks for your comments.

Umah x

[uniqueandalanis4]

hi hugs to you!!!
i know everything isnt ok''so why ask!i know this pain is unbareable tear's just wont stop coming down your face and this is the hardest time in a person's life to lose a loved one!she was my first love and yes she was twenty and she couldnt wait to turn twenty one..but saddy god took her away from me!i use to think i dont believe in god no more when this happen,because he took the one person i loved!
my expiences with her i will always cherish,those memories that me and her shared.. thats how your gonna cope!im here for you anytime you need me!just email me or if u have msn or yahoo im ..ill give mine too you..if no one understands ur pain,im gonna hold ur hand through this because this isnt gonna go away over night,its been 8 yrs sence shes been gone and i got stronger ..use to cry every second of my life,i cry tear's for her now missing her so much and wishing i could call her and say i love you once more..but i cant..i had to realise after yrs that she was sent to me as a blessing and god blessed me truely to have anytime with her!be strong,hold on..dont lose grip!can we talk on msn because i want to talk to you!emails just arent me right at this moment !because i need to hear that ur ok!!

ps byt the way i loved ur poem it was phonominal..
god bless you always ..
april ann..

[be_ki]

I miss you like crazy 

[Greek]

we all miss her more than words could ever explain