Topic: My poems

[Stinky]

More writing

This day, as so many before it a bright and effectionate day. The sun hangs effortless like a big yellow ball in a pale blue sky. My vioce is silent and the words are hushed, for now. I close my eyes and smile an overdue smile of peace within me. The grass touches my feet like a forgotten blanket from so long ago. An overdue moment of tranquility, a section of the earth only kept for me. This day is bliss, forgotten by all but seeped through to my heart forever....

[dutchgirlfan]

it's great you use so much words too describe the situation! I alllways loooove that

[Stinky]

Me too! I am a very discriptive writer and write what I see and think. I think within our minds the world is a different place and when you are sitting just relaxing like that, your mind wonders...Like a flower suddenly becomes so much more than just a stem and petals....If you get what I mean, lol.

[dutchgirlfan]

whoow yeah..your mind is your own world

[kelzduckadork66]

mine certainly is thats for sure

[Stinky]

No more of me

So you think your sorry
You think what your doing is enough

It hurts down on your knees
I

[uniqueandalanis4]

awesome!!!!!!!! i like them ..good work

[dutchgirlfan]

whooow...nice...... 2 whole different poems. That last one is difficult but you also used nice words

[Stinky]

Thank you 

[hazel681]

wow they are both soooooooooo awesome! you are really good!

[Stinky]

thanks girl!   

[be_ki]

Your work is stunnin as always gorgeous girl.

No more of me, I know what that is about. Sugar, she doesn't deserve you in her life, your a shiny star girl 

[Stinky]

The morning draws so bitter,
the food to ashes in my mouth.
Smoke all around me,
grey haze in yesterdays eyes.

My sleepless wakes
Another emptiness upon the cloud
Another sip, I chew my lip
Day breaks with no sound.

The beans fill my empty
I turn down and I smile,
It

[dutchgirlfan]

ohw my god....so touching..all these describing words you use. sigh...the poems are breathtaking; no. 2 is my favorite

[ericb]

I see alot of great writing skills here.God bless.